Anime Princess' fanfic

[Firouz]

Thanks! (HUGS)

[Kriss]

Mar 26, 2011 12:42:37 GMT -5 Firouz said:

Thanks! (HUGS)

You're welcome and sent

[Firouz]

Thanks to Kriss for info on Taryn and Denna!

I've FINALLY completed Chapter 12 part 2!

www.fanfiction.net/s/5358561/13/The_Return_of_Maeve

Leave me a review and let me know how I did!

I hope you like the ending!

(HUGS)

[Firouz]

I love the last chapter. It's so deep and touching. Beautiful. Your description of their feelings are simply the best.

I'm out of words...

Kriss, I'm SO glad you liked the descriptions! I was totally stuck for such a long time, I'm glad I finally got it right! I have been writting this chapter on and off for the past couple of months because I wanted it to be good and sincerely heartfelt.

I'm glad it came out right.

[Doubar]

Awwwe, the next chapter!!! I'm totally sorry I wasn't here earlier today, but I'm happy to see that Kriss was able to help. And I'm totally looking forward to reading the new part (which most likely I'll do tomorrow ).

[Firouz]

Well, I have bit of a teaser on the previous page and the new chapter is just below in on a different post.

So, take your time! I can't wait to see what you think of it.

[Kriss]

@firouz
I'm glad I could help Once I was able to repay for all your help
And you're welcome, I really like the chapter. It even reminds me one of my vid ;D

[Firouz]

Which one?

[Kriss]

This one
www.youtube.com/watch?v=wXgHb_tUfbI

[Doubar]

Oh wow! This teaser is AWESOME!!!! Whoa, can't wait to read the whole thing! The emotions you drew were so vivid, and I found it to be so very interesting how you described the kisses he shared with the others and what was typical for each of them. Very well done so far and I'm sure the finished chapter is equally great or even better.

[Firouz]

Kriss, I think I agree with you! My chapter does somewhat match your vid!

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Doubar, well I'm very happy that you like the teaser. Yea, I thought it might be a nice POV to see how Sinbad reacted to each of the women and their kisses and then show how his heart and soul reacted to them...

Those emotions were the hardest things to draw in actual words...to show them in such detail....that's the hardest thing...it was the hardest chapter to write ever.

I hope you get to read the full chapter soon!

Let me know what you think!

[Doubar]

I can well imagine it was hard to draw those feelings, but you really did well with them! And I hope to read the full chapter tomorrow.

[Firouz]

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[Firouz]

Doubar/Mala, I'll respond here, okay?

Oh. My. God! This chapter is amazing! All those emotions you drew, the doubts, the hurt. It was all so alive, so true. You transported the feelings of Sinbad and Maeve so well to the reader, and what I really want to congratulate on is how you made the surroundings "answer" to that.

I'm SO glad you liked it! I spent a VERY VERY VERY long time trying to get it right! Almost to the fact, that I thought I might have either over did it or not done well enough.

I was able to *see* how the green lands crumbled to a hellish place, was able to see how "Maeve" turned into this creature. Really, the pictures you drew were amazing and they added so much to the story of this chapter!

Actually, the inspiration for this was Hell Hound and the Harpy-Maeve! I figured not only would Sinbad fear what she was, but be tramatized a bit to see the Harpy-Maeve again, you know since he killed the other one.

Oh wow, and Caipra's and DimDim's intervention... that was so great! Sinbad and Maeve really owe them a whole lot for without the two they most likely would have lost the fight!

Yea, I hadn't really planned for that, but at the same time, as DimDim had told Maeve, we each have our roles, and theirs was to keep talking to them to make them see what was really there. That and, well, Poseidon does like Maeve after all!! LOL

Also I like how Bryn in the end responded to the magic. You did well pick up on what has been shown in S2 there, where she, too, seemed to easily get into contact with any powerful magic.

Yes, I wanted to tie her more into this than simply being Maeve's cousin in my version of this. Also, she was subconsciously "in-tune" with the magic since Caipra used the magic she grew with...Avalon Magic! ;D

Okay, what else to tell? I know there are tons of things I wanted to say (and all of them were positive!) but guess I'm forgetting some as I'm writing this review. Anyhow. What I already told you when you posted the teaser: it was a great idea to let him re-live those kisses and it was interesting to read what he felt towards either of them.

Yes, I wanted to expand a bit on those from the teaser, so I'm glad you liked them.

I truly wonder whether Rumina and Turok are dead now or whether they just got heavily attacked and survived. It doesn't quite sound like this, but guess I'll get to know in the Epilogue, right?

You'll have to wait and see, but....

My, I can't believe this story is almost done! It really counts to the best written fanworks out there!

Amazingly well done, dear!

Looking forward to the Epilogue,

Love

TK

**HUGS** Thank you for reading and reviewing each time! You and Kriss were a bit inspiration to continue writing! Everyone who helped me too, were great inspiration so thanks!

I, too, can't believe I've all but reached the end. I might be writing a sequal. It's called The Return of Bryn, and it's about how she and the crew meet a Lady, Roslyn, and she leads them back to Albion. It'll be how Bryn gets her memory back...hence, The Return of Bryn!

But, that's a LONG time out there and I probably won't get started onit till Summer, but it's a thought to keep in the back of my head at least.

Again, Thanks!!

[Doubar]

Mar 30, 2011 17:23:09 GMT -5 Firouz said:

Doubar/Mala, I'll respond here, okay?

No problem.

I'm SO glad you liked it! I spent a VERY VERY VERY long time trying to get it right! Almost to the fact, that I thought I might have either over did it or not done well enough.

Oh, I can well see that you spent a lot of time with writing it. Everthing is so well balanced and so vividly told that I could not imagine one can write something like that down so easily. And your sure enough did neither overdo it, nor did you do it not well enough.

Actually, the inspiration for this was Hell Hound and the Harpy-Maeve! I figured not only would Sinbad fear what she was, but be tramatized a bit to see the Harpy-Maeve again, you know since he killed the other one.

Hum, that's a very interesting thought indeed! I never had it I got to admit. I always thought he'd not ponder about this anymore (I mean the harpy-Maeve itself). But I suppose you're right: it could easily have somewhat traumatized him.

Yea, I hadn't really planned for that, but at the same time, as DimDim had told Maeve, we each have our roles, and theirs was to keep talking to them to make them see what was really there. That and, well, Poseidon does like Maeve after all!! LOL

Oh, indeed. And mainly in the AoS verse everyone's got their role. And personally I like a lot the idea of Maeve & Sinbad being like children to Caipra and DimDim. So, yeah, I'm happy that this found the way into your plans!

Yes, I wanted to tie her more into this than simply being Maeve's cousin in my version of this. Also, she was subconsciously "in-tune" with the magic since Caipra used the magic she grew with...Avalon Magic! ;D

Whic is very cool! I really have grown to like Bryn and am happy when I read stories where she gets integrated into everything. Ooh, and you're perfectly right: Bryn grew up with the same magic as Maeve did.

Yes, I wanted to expand a bit on those from the teaser, so I'm glad you liked them.

I sure did. ;

You'll have to wait and see, but....

Waiting patiently. ;D

**HUGS** Thank you for reading and reviewing each time! You and Kriss were a bit inspiration to continue writing! Everyone who helped me too, were great inspiration so thanks!

I, too, can't believe I've all but reached the end. I might be writing a sequal. It's called The Return of Bryn, and it's about how she and the crew meet a Lady, Roslyn, and she leads them back to Albion. It'll be how Bryn gets her memory back...hence, The Return of Bryn!
But, that's a LONG time out there and I probably won't get started onit till Summer, but it's a thought to keep in the back of my head at least.

Again, Thanks!!

*hugs back* You're most welcome, dear! Each and every chapter was wroth the r&r!!! And like I said, for me this is one of the best AoS fics out there! It is extremely well written, holds a fantastic plot and gives each and every crew member a new depth! And that is an amazing mixture!
OMG, and I would LOVE to read a new story!!!!! And it would then be about Bryn regaining her memories you say? Oh wow, that sounds so very intriguing!!!! I really hope you'll be able to write it down. And I'll happy wait till June then.