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Post by Firouz on Mar 13, 2010 20:52:08 GMT -5
First thing, what fic are you talking about? Is it posted? If it is, where?
Oh, and I'm on my way to posting the new chapter, Doubar's Loyalty.
I hope you like it!
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Post by Firouz on Mar 13, 2010 21:10:11 GMT -5
It's up and ready!
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Post by 19101989 on Mar 14, 2010 0:48:42 GMT -5
Great firouze, great!!!  will check it out as soon as possible!  First thing, what fic are you talking about? Is it posted? If it is, where? aww, It's a romantic/fluff Doubar/Bryn fiction written By Doubar and Me. first started as a normal in-character exchange via pms,and then turned to be a story contained of 17/19/27 page. ;D here it's in the members area  distandlands.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=club&action=display&thread=339we really will be glad if you give it a try and tell us what you think! |
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Post by 19101989 on Mar 14, 2010 9:14:19 GMT -5
@firouze: wonderful chapter. the test was really perfect and witty. I enjoyed reading it. read and reviewed  can't wait for your next chapter |
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Post by Doubar on Mar 14, 2010 9:19:41 GMT -5
*hops up and down* Aww, no, me missed this post here. So it's up already? *immediately goes to read* **** *is back from reading* D'awwwww. Brilliant! I already left my comment on it but will gladly repeat it here: I really, really liked it. And making the child resemble both - Sinbad and the Lass was a brilliant twist. Simply well done, dear. |
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Post by Firouz on Mar 14, 2010 13:04:43 GMT -5
;D
I'm glad you both liked it! I was worried that the test might have been a bit fast since it was really only 5-7 pages, but it seemed to end well.
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I also like your Bryn/Doubar fic! The scenery and the feelings you wrote down are AMAZING!! I LOVED it! Especially how shy Bryn was and how Doubar guided her with her eyes closed! ;D
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Post by 19101989 on Mar 14, 2010 13:07:58 GMT -5
@firouze: Nha, all your story is just amazing. and the idea of the tests increased this brilliancy. besides Doubar's loyalty was really smart *applauds * _________________________________________________ awww you read it?*feels her face lightens up* that's...your opinion is so very... *is speechless* thanx a lot firouze. |
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Post by Doubar on Mar 14, 2010 13:52:18 GMT -5
@firouz: *scratches head* But you said 17 pages ... or did you mean the whole fic is 17 pages long now? xD Anyway, no, I didn't have the feeling it was rushed or anything. Just like I said: well done. And, awwww, *hugs her* thank you for those words, dear. You have no idea how happy you're making Bryn and me by saying this. Aya, loved the first one as well. And about the guiding: well, I let it flow and let Doubar decide what he'd do. *pats her inner first mate's back while he tries to hide that blush that's forming on his cheeks ;D * alex: *takes hands in hers, jumps up and down* You noticed that till now everyone who read the story liked it? |
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Post by Firouz on Mar 14, 2010 14:17:23 GMT -5
@doubar, *blinks* Ah, no. The whole chapter is 24 pages long, but the scene with Sinbad and Doubar fighting it out was about 5-7 pages long. That's what I was nervous about. I hoped that it would be or feel rushed.
@doubar/Bryn, and yes, your story is very and a fluffy! LOVED IT!
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Post by 19101989 on Mar 14, 2010 14:20:23 GMT -5
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Post by Firouz on Mar 14, 2010 14:20:42 GMT -5
With Doubar's test, I wanted it to be in his face and subtle at the same time.
Having Sinbad look evil was inspired by the evil mirror image from Hell House. That would be Doubar's up front testing.
I felt that having Scratch take on the physical characteristics of a possible child of Sinbad and Maeve's would hit Doubar straight in the heart. Since he already adores children as a whole, one who looks amazingly enough like those two, could easily claim his heart. This was his subtle one.
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Post by Doubar on Mar 14, 2010 14:24:58 GMT -5
@firouz: Awwe, I see. In any case: just like I said: I didn't feel the events were rushed. Having Sinbad look evil was inspired by the evil mirror image from Hell House. That would be Doubar's up front testing. I felt that having Scratch take on the physical characteristics of a possible child of Sinbad and Maeve's would hit Doubar straight in the heart. Since he already adores children as a whole, one who looks amazingly enough like those two, could easily claim his heart. This was his subtle one. Awww, what a witty idea. And I know I already left it as a comment, but, aya, having the child mirror both would shake him to the core. Just brilliant. The evil looked good and the good looked evil. Simply a brilliant twist! And, haha, yeah, our story was pure fluff. ;D But am glad you liked it nevertheless. |
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Post by 19101989 on Mar 14, 2010 14:26:31 GMT -5
that was really brilliant. aww, i said it before and i say it again. you really captured the big man perfectly . no other words can describe how I admire this fiction. it held all the good factors of the good fictions I believed it should have. |
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Post by Firouz on Mar 14, 2010 16:50:36 GMT -5
Then I have succeeded in writing! Thanks Bryn! I'm glad you like it so much!
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Post by 19101989 on Mar 14, 2010 17:27:33 GMT -5
@firouz: you're welcome!  yup! i liked it too much! I read lots-if it's not all sinbad's fictions. so i can tell that yours is one of the best i have ever read without any exaggeration |
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brilliant! 