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Post by Firouz on Mar 14, 2010 19:19:27 GMT -5
Jumps up and down happily and hug Bryn tightly!! ((TACKLE HUGS))
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Post by 19101989 on Mar 15, 2010 2:18:48 GMT -5
*is being tacklehugged,hugs back*  ;D  |
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Post by Doubar on Mar 15, 2010 5:30:30 GMT -5
@firouz: Hey, you know what I have been thinking yesterday when I read your fic: You still aren't sure whether you'll include M-rated stuff or not? Because, ya know, I would really advice you to move your story to the non-M-rated section. It's really a brilliant one and it's simply a shame that it goes mostly unnoticed there in the M-section. I mean, you hardly got any reviewers asides from Bryn and me - and if you ask me the location is the reason. True, fanfic.net has become rather quiet anyway but I guess hardly ever anyone has a look at the M-section (at least I never looked there before you told me that your story lies there) so maybe you should think about moving it back to the normal section. Just a suggestion.  |
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Post by 19101989 on Mar 15, 2010 11:44:32 GMT -5
agree with Doubar. Firouze, you can make it at least T rated for any violence in the future or any darker themes. and for any deep romantic scenes you can make a note before this chapter or this scene for K= or K or T rated readers to be aware of. i saw lots do the same.  |
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Post by Firouz on Mar 15, 2010 11:50:16 GMT -5
I think I agree, I was actually going to move it when I got to the site today after here.
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Post by 19101989 on Mar 15, 2010 11:51:48 GMT -5
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Post by Doubar on Mar 15, 2010 12:00:42 GMT -5
*some Doubar-like-part of me feels totally smart for having adviced something to Firouz and having the scientist take up on it  * ;D Nha, honestly: I think it's a good decision for your story is way too good to lie there unnoticed. |
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Post by Firouz on Mar 15, 2010 13:01:08 GMT -5
Thank you for the support! I'm glad that my story is being well received. And it's been moved! LOL |
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Post by 19101989 on Mar 15, 2010 13:07:09 GMT -5
'welcome! and yeah! noticed that you changed it to T rated! |
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Post by Doubar on Mar 15, 2010 13:30:14 GMT -5
@firouz: Aw, don't mention it, dear. Your story simply IS good. And, whee, aya, there it is in the normal section. |
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Post by Firouz on Mar 15, 2010 18:43:55 GMT -5
;D
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Post by Firouz on May 1, 2010 10:53:34 GMT -5
**Is off to type up Bryn's chapter**
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Post by Firouz on May 1, 2010 14:58:11 GMT -5
Okay, I'm back now! Bryn's chapter is up! Have fun reading! Please, let me know what you think! ((HUGS)) |
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Post by 19101989 on May 1, 2010 16:16:05 GMT -5
Oh, Sam  I can't find words. I'm totally impressed. honestly this chapter was one of the best Talking-about-Bryn inner fight chapters ever. I felt her fighting. her fears and the way she faced her test. The test itself was awesome. Totally perfect. just a simple note: would you please make few stars like this ***** to part between an event and another? but Rather than that I'm till now impressed.  and left my review |
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Post by Firouz on May 1, 2010 16:23:38 GMT -5
I tried! FF. Net wouldn't let me put them in!  I typed them in when I was in Word, but when I put it in FF.Net they all vanished!  I tried to put them back in, but the editing part of Ff.net wouldn't let me.  Sorry, I tried, I really did! ***************************** On the other hand, I'm glad you liked Bryn's chapter. I was a bit worried there for a moment. I wasn't sure if I had gotten the fear and confusion across to the reader well, but apparently I have! ((HUGS)) Thanks! |
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I can't find words. I'm totally impressed. honestly this chapter was one of the best Talking-about-Bryn inner fight chapters ever. I felt her fighting. her fears and the way she faced her test. The test itself was awesome. Totally perfect.
