Eric/Deamus
Merchant at Sea
"Did you get my flowers?..."
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Post by Eric/Deamus on Aug 26, 2014 13:40:17 GMT -5
I'm sorry I didn't reply yet... but really I'll do tonight... like seriously  I was just busy finishing the last update of Reunion & Revelation, sooooooooooooooo HERE IT'S..... AS I promised  The LAST chapter of 'R&R' Please, enjoy Just going for a quick snack then I'll reply to the other posts |
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Eric/Deamus
Merchant at Sea
"Did you get my flowers?..."
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Post by Eric/Deamus on Aug 26, 2014 17:53:53 GMT -5
@ Doubar and Manche,well, again and again I can't help but agree with you. Doubar you voiced my thoughts about Sinbad fear exactly and i couldn't said them any better than you already did. he's still afraid of the sea no matter what, every time he thought he didn't the sea just takes someone very dear to him! and about himself drowning too.. very logical, we didn't witness it only in Trickster but in The Beast Within in his kidnapping scene, it's true he was shocked and feared from the harpie or the creature who was there but still i sensed -if i remember correctly- he feared drowning in this moment too. may be i am wrong though! being the captain or the master of 7 seas doesn't mean that he completely overcome his fear, may be what keeps him that strong and brave regarding to the sea his stubbornness and pride to prove he overcame this fear and that he's stronger than the sea or than he used to be.. which only prove the real opposite, the unconscious persistent fear -that whatever he achieves he still has no control on it, well spoken Manche- always makes him more careful, wiser in his decisions concerning sailing thus stronger. the sea can never be trusted. A monster. right, Doubar? For Doubar, your point of view is very logical.. he was forced to face adult life -in upbringing his little brother- so early and so he emotionally grew up earlier too. I like the idea of taking his parents death as a grief. that's so reasonable. while the cruelty of the butcher crimes could form his fear. seeing how he's emotional, i imagine he couldn't bear it! As for the age, I find it very suitable what you decided good choice.
Manche, I never heard of such Fortaza in real life! let aside that the name isn't Arabian as well! i believe it's a modified fictional version of Jack!
@doubar, well, that's a new info for me... that was his plan, eh? I don't know why it sounds familiar! !!!  that's new too!! was it Naha's plan too?
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Eric/Deamus
Merchant at Sea
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Post by Eric/Deamus on Aug 26, 2014 17:56:58 GMT -5
@ Firouz, thanks so much for the review, I hope you really like it. Sorry it didn't contain much new info for you as I mentioned some of it within our discussion here. Hope the continuation will be better thanks again 
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Eric/Deamus
Merchant at Sea
"Did you get my flowers?..."
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Post by Eric/Deamus on Aug 26, 2014 18:26:33 GMT -5
You're a talented author and your works very creative and enjoyable. Plus, you manage to capture voices well so - yeah, 't was about time.  WOW! that's priceless Doubar, thanks so much for such great and precious words... I can't find words to reply! *blushing* it means a lot for me that i get such consideration from you, that it's how you see my works! that's really so precious to me! thanks so much ((HUGSS)) Nope... certainly I get your feeling Well, if you wanna someone's opinion that totally agree with him *me  it's how i see eating too* the man should sense the food while eating as the artist feel his art work. and to feel the food and valuate it you appreciate how it's made -if cooked- and served, you sense every single detail about it and if you do, then you judge the cooking and consider it an art as well... thus feeling it if you're in charge of it.. and eventually you sense the cooking too and loved to make it so you can really made it the right way you see it, being the cooking artist... you'll enjoy cooking just like eating exactly, sometimes it's more than it if you consider the excitement of the thought that you'll enjoy eating it afterwards! other times you just feel satisfied when people appraise your handwork (and believe it or not, this latter case help sometimes in diet regime! i sometimes use it, cooking the high calories food i love and distribute it all or most of it, seeing people like its taste satisfy me as if i enjoyed its taste too! weird..) Oh, don't say that! I'm sure your cooking is delicious you're welcome, but know that it's really the truth Oh, don't mention it! As for the replies, take your time no rushing |
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Post by banmaixanh on Aug 27, 2014 0:32:39 GMT -5
I'm sorry I didn't reply yet... but really I'll do tonight... like seriously I was just busy finishing the last update of Reunion & Revelation, sooooooooooooooo HERE IT'S..... AS I promised The LAST chapter of 'R&R' Please, enjoy The last chapter??? Wait Teti. I think I already read until chapter 7 right? So I have only two chapters left to read and the story end already?  |
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Eric/Deamus
Merchant at Sea
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Post by Eric/Deamus on Aug 27, 2014 4:50:03 GMT -5
Oh Ban, no it's not like that! Reunion & Revelations is part 1 only... the whole fiction is divided on many parts. At first I wished I could write it wholly as one big fiction! But I was unable to! Seeing that the adventures themselves would take a big shots as well, -I mean 3 parts... each is very different from the others and I liked the idea that each would be separated- so I divided the story into parts. -the first is R&R (already posted & finished) is an introduction -the second is transitional... you may very well skip it -the following 3 parts are the real adventures taking place on 3 different steps or places, each has its own story, its own characters that the crew will meet... thus separated into 3 parts. and there is an additional part -out of their original adventure- that took place during their journey... in their way to their destination... it's a story or an adventure itself (may be) from the past that reveals all remained secrets and gives the missed links between the characters in the series. their past. So, don't worry, the story didn't ended at this, it just started! the road is still long as it seems! |
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Post by banmaixanh on Aug 27, 2014 9:17:28 GMT -5
I'm happy to hear that.  When you said you posted the last chapter of R&R already, I was shock because as far as I remember the story must be the very long one. It just can't end like that. I was worried that because of the limit of time you decided to shorten the story. I know an author who did it to her story and I feel very sorry for her decision because her fic has a really good start to end that way and I really don't want it to happen to your story. I know I still owe you some reply, I'll try to reply on this weekend. |
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Eric/Deamus
Merchant at Sea
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Post by Eric/Deamus on Aug 28, 2014 13:40:46 GMT -5
banmaixanhOops, I am sorry I left that impression! I admit that this division seemed kinda abnormal to me.. but somehow it seemed convenient seeing the length of story and the slowness of the events... it's one of my defaults in writing! But, entering in the new school term is kinda scary thought regarding the update because everyone warn me how this coming term will be very tough enough and stressing. which leaves me wondering about my chances to write anything once the trimester starts  And.. ooh! about that author.. that's really a shame!!!!  She could easily put it on hiatus and the fans would wait whatever long it might take. As a fan myself, I wait too long for any update for most of authors! seems everyone are struggling with the time everywhere already  I feel sorry she took that decision! But in all cases, thank you for your feelings about my story that's very very appreciative that you see it that way and you care for it thanks so much, Take your time with replying though, these posts aren't going anywhere
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Post by Eleana on Aug 30, 2014 16:25:42 GMT -5
Oh I like this fanfiction of yours! I like the idea you have, the siblings coming from this huge and powerful family who was reduced to ashes because of a war. I'm asking myself is Maeve have something to do with it, linked to her powers... A big war upon a big weapon? Might be the reason why she was so inclined to denied those powers of hers. Your story is intriguing, I like the plot so much ! I can't wait to see a reunion between Sinbad and Maeve, Maeve and the crew and of course, Maeve and Bryn. If Dermott and Bryn does know each other - were lovers as you suggested - than the girls probably knows each other since a very long time. It will be interesting to see their reunion and if seeing Maeve can help Bryn find some of her memories back. I just hope you can spoil us with the first chapter of this second part very soon Of course, take your time... I'm just over excited when I see a new chapter of my favorites stories. I'm like a little kid, jumping around |
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Eric/Deamus
Merchant at Sea
"Did you get my flowers?..."
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Post by Eric/Deamus on Aug 30, 2014 17:30:10 GMT -5
Oh I like this fanfiction of yours! Whoooooooooooohoow Eleana! thanks so much... you have no idea how your words make me feel right now. I'm so honored you read and like it Actually the war itself or the attack on them has nothing to do with her directly but with the whole family... but you caught half of the actual fact really, this attack or war was the reason why she denied her power... and more and it affected her so that she directed her life into very different path while her brother remained as he is. it'll all be mentioned within Bryn's tale, soon i hope Sinbad will have a special earlier reunion with an unconscious Maeve.. when I finish this chapter I'll announce about it here. the other reunions will come after they find the egg and she regain her consciousness Of course they knew each other, actually Maeve is very involved in Bryn's tale as well as Dermott ... the three of them had a past together. And yeah, again you caught it, Maeve will help Bryn regain all her memory, but it would be an indirect help though... haha,,, you see, words like that that really encourage me to find time i'll really to find time to go on with the story sooner,, i'll try my best, promise. but seeing it's already becoming one of your favorite is just AWESOME!!! thanks so much,, i really will try my best. and, you know..... you made my day <3 <3 <3 |
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Eric/Deamus
Merchant at Sea
"Did you get my flowers?..."
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Post by Eric/Deamus on Sept 2, 2014 5:55:14 GMT -5
manche, Ooh! thank you SO much for your review...... it's very very appreciated And you like it!... I'm so glad you do and find it interesting.... specially the nightmare! i didn't plan to make it that long though, but that's how it came out with me! yeah, i felt the need to mention how he really felt during her absence unlike the show that didn't it give another thought except in the last ep. So i needed to mention it and describe his real hidden feelings even if hints of it. well, may be the mere idea of it being an awful nightmare that annoy Sinbad, may be the uneasiness of Sinbad during it, may be it was the idea of Maeve dangerous situation and her need for help! I'm glad i could created such faint background during the nice moments because it all proves that the situation is critical. About the bloom... well, who knows? may be it's not a symbol for her for something or someone else!... let's see what the adventure will reveal to us Needed to cut my reply here.... sorry, i'm still at work! will complete it tonight isA
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Eric/Deamus
Merchant at Sea
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Post by Eric/Deamus on Sept 3, 2014 3:16:59 GMT -5
manche, I'm sorry i'm taking that long and that slow to reply, but since i started to be back at work i feel so exhausted from the trip going to it and back! so i had very limited time that i feel refreshed to be able stay online! hopefully it won't take long to get back to be used to it again. Score! Actually you are the first one to guess that it may be a way that Maeve tries to send a message and it comes out to him as this nightmare In fact, it should be a simple dream or so, nothing annoying but seeing the core of the message being her in danger won't let it be that simple for sure.... so it turns out into a nightmare! and obviously it's related to Rumina, what Maeve is facing or faced, ( Spoiler) though the content of the nightmare itself has nothing to do with her but may be just to inform who's beyond the danger facing Maeve. there are clues in it for sure.... may be it's all clues only! but not precisely about Maeve location
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Post by manche on Sept 3, 2014 15:08:07 GMT -5
I really made a good guess. Oh, it is wonderful! And I like your idea with this way of communication, dear Eric.
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Eric/Deamus
Merchant at Sea
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Post by Eric/Deamus on Dec 26, 2014 15:20:14 GMT -5
Hello there, everyone As we're close to start a new year I like to start a new part of my fictional series concerning AoS. I already mentioned before that I wrote most of the chapters of this part three months ago. What took from me such long time to start posting it, was my very poor time and.. well, I had/and still have actually a few trouble with chapter 2! or the first chapter if we consider the posted one as prologue. Yeah, I'm one of those who write according to inspiration and don't follow the order of the chapters  Today, I just caught the chance of the positive mood I gained from Christmas celebration, and revised the prologue, posted it Good step, right? better than nothing. so let's just hope that I would be able to solve the problem concerning chapter 2 to be able to update regularly afterward... at least for 6 or 7 times!  So here is the new update: 'Mervellya.. The Many Faces of Evil: The first Clash!'And here is the cover picture >>> it needs modifications though, I'm not satisfied with the title there! Once I modify it I'll change it here. Enjoy |
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Post by Eleana on Dec 26, 2014 17:11:16 GMT -5
Oh God, I was so excited when I saw that the second part of your story was on ff.net ! The prologue was great, I look forward for more ! Will we have a chapter about the reunion between Sinbad and a unconscious Maeve as you mentionned in one of your answers here ? Thank you for having taken the time to update this wonderful story of yours |
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I was just busy finishing the last update of Reunion & Revelation, sooooooooooooooo HERE IT'S..... AS I promised 
I feel sorry she took that decision!
