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Post by Doubar on Dec 30, 2014 9:25:32 GMT -5
Thanks, Lass!  I'm glad you think it fits him. :3 And Sinbad is right, you don't need to apologise at all! This was a beautiful post, and such a touching one, too. <3 Only, say you two - it sounds like Sinbad and Maeve would immediately return to the Nomad without stopping by at the market anymore. Or did I get that wrong?  |
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Post by Sinbad on Dec 30, 2014 16:10:49 GMT -5
My mental image is that the market is between them and the Nomad.  |
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Post by Doubar on Dec 30, 2014 16:40:24 GMT -5
Fair enough. |
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Post by Mala on Jan 2, 2015 11:01:45 GMT -5
Sweet heavens, Maeve, I LOVE your post! All that emotion, it almost made me cry! Awesome!!!!!  Also, see who else I dusted off. The poor lady has been rather non-existant for the last four pages I am aware but then it's no real use to comment on each and every turn of the battle anyway, now is it? But since this is a rather vital moment I made a short post with her. Hope that's okay with you two.  |
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Post by Maeve on Jan 2, 2015 20:05:02 GMT -5
Aww, thanks honey!! I'm so glad you like my scribbles really, 'cause if they can trigger strong emotions in the readers and move them like this, then I suppose I'm doing something right! Yay! And by the stars!! Your post with Mala was beyond BEAUTIFUL!!!  I liked everything about it!! Every word! It's so deep and poetic and tragic and sad and beautiful all at the same time! You really captured everything about what Sinbad and Maeve went through, and what they're feeling. It made me hurt for them, and made me realize how sad their story really is.  |
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Post by Mala on Jan 3, 2015 10:34:06 GMT -5
I know exactly what you mean! To me, it's the greatest accomplishment as well when my writings are able to evoke emotions in the reader. That said, your scribbles - as you call them - are magnificent, and you never cease to amaze me with them! Awweee, and you really like my little in-betweener? That makes me so happy! I was a tiny bit worried about channeling things in the wrong way. I mean, I love how Mala has the ability to perceive emotions on a different level, but at the same time that makes it be difficult for me as the writer. Because I have to listen carefully to what you and Nili say with your posts. Luckily, we seem to share an understanding when it comes to these chars and I'm so glad that I was able to capture it all. Yeah, S2 made them be quite a tragic pair, didn't it? But if someone can make it through that, then it's those two! <3 |
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Post by Doubar on Jan 5, 2015 12:16:01 GMT -5
Sinbad : Ah, I think I might just melt right here on the spot! Your post is so touching! There's nothing better than a heart-felt "I missed you" during a reunion-scene. Pure bliss! ^^
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Post by tzigone on Mar 2, 2015 13:10:44 GMT -5
You guys are doing a fantastic job; can't wait to see what happens next. Can't wait to see how the rest of the crew reacts, and the M/S fallout and why Maeve doesn't want them to know she knows Bryn and so on. I need to reread the last setting, though; somehow I lost Dermott in the action and don't know where he is.
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Post by Doubar on Mar 2, 2015 16:35:42 GMT -5
Dermott should still be somewhere near the main lane for Daisy didn't have as much time to play anymore so the poor birdie got kind of neglected. >.<
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Post by Kalani on Apr 8, 2015 21:59:07 GMT -5
Guess who finally posted with Kalani! xD A bit short, but hopefully some bit of coherence and quality? Maybe?
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Post by Doubar on Apr 10, 2015 12:56:53 GMT -5
Guess who finally posted with Kalani! xD A bit short, but hopefully some bit of coherence and quality? Maybe? Yaaaay!!!! And I love the post. Of course Kalani wouldn't recognise the name right away but then she hears the sound of wings and remembers. Oh, but I feel so bad for her there. It really is about time this fight ended. *hugs to the poor merchant* <3 |
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Post by Firouz on Apr 11, 2015 19:30:52 GMT -5
I suppose Firouz needs to speak up after clocking one baddie to the ground. Do we know where Sinbad is in the market from the crew's POV? If not, Firouz can speak up and ask?
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Post by Doubar on Apr 12, 2015 13:26:04 GMT -5
So far the crew have no idea where Sinbad disappeared to. To be honest, I think Doubar didn't even notice that his little brother ran off to somewhere else so Firouz asking about their captain's whereabouts does actually sound like a sensible idea. |
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Post by Doubar on May 4, 2015 13:54:56 GMT -5
Firouz: Awesome post there, dear!! I already have an idea what I will do with Doubar's post and then we can have Sinbad and Maeve enter the scene soon.
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Post by Firouz on May 9, 2015 0:04:47 GMT -5
Sounds good to me!
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I'm glad you think it fits him. :3
I liked everything about it!! Every word! It's so deep and poetic and tragic and sad and beautiful all at the same time! You really captured everything about what Sinbad and Maeve went through, and what they're feeling. It made me hurt for them, and made me realize how sad their story really is. 
