the time line

[Doubar]

@eleana: Thanx honey for checking.

@sarah: *nods* Since Scratch first observed Bryn and then found Sarah, it would be evening in Ash.

[Scratch]

@ Doubar: Aye, note taken.

@ Sarah: It'll be evening when Scratch would covertly land in Asher and spy on the impatient Sarah . At least that makes some sense.

[Guest]

Okay, I think in my first post, I did not mention the time of the day. But I think I will mention it in my second post.

[Mala]

Okay. I finally added the past events:
1) The realm of mist
2) Kriss' and Ziad's first meeting

[Scratch]

*waves a flag of approval*

[Guest]

*cracks up imagining Scratch waving a tiny white flag* ;D

[Guest]

hey
Do you guys mind if I write Talulah's ship at the port of Basra?

[Guest]

I would write the ship sailing to the port, and maybe you can find Mel hiding on the ship before it ports.

[Guest]

so what about if i do it on the ocean then maybe in a couple of days at the port and discover Cyane?

[Guest]

Sure, sounds fine to me.

[Guest]

;D

[Doubar]

Yep. *approves as well*

[Mala]

Latest updates:

1) Thea's intro.
2) Changes on doubts and fears:

Basra The tavern - inside Under The Crown of Ogotay The streets - the dark side of the moon (takes place in between "inside Under The Crown of Ogotay") -> The tavern - Doubts and fears (continues the storyline of "the dark side of the moon"; takes place in between "inside Under The Crown of Ogotay" - see page 14 of the tavern)

[Firouz]

Sounds good to me!

[Guest]

Question: What do you mean by "in between?"