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Post by Mala on Sept 25, 2009 4:32:38 GMT -5
Update for: 1) Inside Under the Crown of Ogotay 2) Oceanic Opression 3) Blue depths and Meeting again Please everyone check if the order I gave them is okay or whether I have to change something. Thanx.  |
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Post by alex on Sept 25, 2009 4:41:56 GMT -5
Looks fine to me, unless you want to be really, really picky and move "The streets of Basra - finding featherbrain (takes place near the end of "Arrival in Basra")" after "Port - Arrival in Basra."
And I think we should write the story in the general timeline sense.
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Post by Doubar on Sept 25, 2009 4:43:46 GMT -5
And I think we should write the story in the general timeline sense. Meaning? |
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Post by alex on Sept 25, 2009 5:13:39 GMT -5
Meaning the chapters should go in the same order as the timeline.  |
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Post by Doubar on Sept 25, 2009 5:32:51 GMT -5
Ah, that you meant. Aye, no arguing about that one. |
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Post by Rongar on Sept 25, 2009 17:56:24 GMT -5
Looks okay to me!
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Post by Mala on Dec 29, 2009 12:39:19 GMT -5
Update for the latest threads: 1) The continuation of "inside Under The Crown of Ogotay" 2) The dark side of the moon 3) Doubts and fears. Please tell me if I missed any or made a mistake. |
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Post by Rongar on Dec 29, 2009 23:47:33 GMT -5
Ah, I don't think so.
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Post by Doubar on Dec 30, 2009 5:00:38 GMT -5
Thanx, Rongar, for having a look at it.  |
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Post by Mala on Jan 26, 2010 15:56:51 GMT -5
Update for back to plotting. Scratch: Could you please check that I integrated it correctly? |
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Post by Scratch on Jan 26, 2010 16:09:44 GMT -5
*two flaming thumbs up* You've done well. It's placed right where it should be |
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Post by Doubar on Jan 26, 2010 16:11:33 GMT -5
Thanx. |
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Post by Mala on Feb 5, 2010 15:11:15 GMT -5
Update for 1) Eleana's past 2) "The land of Ash ..." Please check if I sorted them in correctly. Scratch&Sarah: When posting, please keep in mind that it's late evening/night (dark already!).  |
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Post by Eleana on Feb 5, 2010 15:42:21 GMT -5
It's allright for me Of course ! |
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Post by Guest on Feb 6, 2010 0:42:38 GMT -5
Hm, so I should adjust my post to evening.  |
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