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Post by MJ on Mar 23, 2013 13:00:13 GMT -5
@kriss: Awww, so glad you liked it! This game has given us carte blanche to think of any romantic gesture we ever hoped would come our way and then multiply it with a thousand ;D @ban; I agree with you that Doubar is more shy than say Sinbad, but he has done the scary thing already- mainly while blushing and looking at his feet, which was to tell Bryn he liked her. I guess I could compare it to doing something scary... like skydiving. I would never ever do that on my own, but if I had a good friend do it with me, take my hand and say: "let's do this" then I probably would. Doing things together, and doing things for other people makes a person braver in my experience. And I agree with TK, it would've been an incredibly boring story had they not had any guts. It would've gone something like this: Doubar: Hey Bryn... Bryn: Yes? Doubar: *suddenly shy* never mind. THE END  |
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Post by banmaixanh on Mar 26, 2013 8:14:49 GMT -5
@doubar & MJ: You're right. The story is much funnier because they dare to talk to each other and then the romantic scenes take the place. If Doubar didn't tell Bryn that he liked her there was nothing to write. But the truth is I was a little shock when I read the first chapter. But the second and the third ones I already get use to the idea so I enjoy them a lot.  Can I give you a little suggestion? Any of you think about candles, firework, butterflies or glowworms? (look at my avatar) I love those scenes a lot but I'll never use them in my fics. (My fics aren't romantic ones. ) So can you write anything with them? |
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Post by Doubar on Mar 26, 2013 8:42:07 GMT -5
@ban: Yeah, the first chapter is a bit baffling. But it's so cute to imagine Doubar blurting it out like this - I instantly fell in love with the idea. :3 And I'm happy to know that by now you enjoy it, too. Now as for your promts... I was already planning on a firwork one. Just didn't get to write it down yet. ^^ And concerning candles, butterflies and glowworms... d'aww... I like those ideas a lot. And I daresay that we'll keep them in mind.  Oh, and btw... your av is a lovely! Very beautiful! MJ: I'll try to get the next tag done soon btw. I've already written the dialogue down and only need to flesh it out a bit more. I started it last week but couldn't continue after what happened.  But things are getting better and I actually start to feel like taking up on the game again soon. |
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Post by Doubar on Mar 28, 2013 7:24:22 GMT -5
@teti: Awwww, thank you so much for the lovely review. I (and surely enough also MJ ^^) am super happy you enjoyed the read. Indeed that first chapter is just awesome. I, too, love it so much. And true enough - he's somehow cuter when being around Bryn, eh? Aw, the two are just doing each other good. D'awww... *feels loved, and very honoured*  |
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Post by MJ on Mar 28, 2013 11:19:28 GMT -5
@teti: Yay you reviewed! Excellent! I'm glad you like it. And I second everything TK said (I am calling TK, well TK in this thread because if I keep calling her Doubar things get confusing) @tk: It's thursday, that means it's posting day, are you going to do the honours or am I? I'll make you a deal: I'll post if you finish your tag ;D It'll cheer you up. Make 'em do something silly, they're good at that ;D |
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Post by Doubar on Mar 28, 2013 11:35:04 GMT -5
Lol, I'm totally fine with you calling me TK here. ;D Aw, and true, it's Thursday again. Awesome. Don't know, either way is fine with me. I can easily do the posting this time but am just as fine with you doing it. Eh, the tag I got in store though is no D/B one. This time M/S are my victims.  It's not a sillly shot though, but rather a thoughtful one (no gloomy thoughts though, don't you worry ). >.>
Just uploaded Ch 4. www.fanfiction.net/s/9099662/4/The-Courting-of-Bryn |
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Post by MJ on Mar 28, 2013 15:31:08 GMT -5
Oh squee! It's the really cute one you wrote with the magical extension to the Nomad's already overtaxed insides and Doubar's cooking skills! It's so cute and feels very homey and nice, really it's the one where you start to think that those two could make a very warm and loving home together.
@ban: oooh nice suggestions! Though if we're putting fireflies in I will call Sinbad captain Tightpants and there will be people with brown coats on randomly walking by and there will probably be a ship called 'Serenity' sailing by ;D Candles and firework on ship is a bad, bad idea but on dry land, away from flammable wooden ships, is a very good idea. We'd probably have to send them to 5th century China to get the good fireworks though, and then we could have Doubar spell out Bryn's name in lights in the sky, that would be so cuuuute!
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Post by Kriss on Mar 28, 2013 15:39:47 GMT -5
I have just read the new chapter! It's so so sweet Doubar trying to make another surprise Goes to read again |
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Post by Doubar on Mar 28, 2013 15:46:26 GMT -5
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Post by Kriss on Mar 28, 2013 15:59:01 GMT -5
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Post by Doubar on Mar 29, 2013 12:06:20 GMT -5
oooh nice suggestions! Though if we're putting fireflies in I will call Sinbad captain Tightpants and there will be people with brown coats on randomly walking by and there will probably be a ship called 'Serenity' sailing by ;D Looool, how cool is that?! ;D Would totally love to see such shot be written down and wonder just how many readers would make the connection. ;D @kriss: |
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Post by banmaixanh on Mar 29, 2013 12:20:50 GMT -5
MJ: Glad you like my ideas. Yeah, the ideas should be used on the land. If we have firework on the ship. I don't dare to imagine what would happen. 5th century??? I don't think we have to go that far. If I remember correctly, in the third ep of season 2, Firouz bought the pottery which was told was made in China at Minh Dynasty. If so it must be at least at 14th century. And your imagination, yeah, it is so cute. I think there is no need with Bryn's name in the sky but just Doubar prepares the special firework for her is already cute enough. @doubar: Read the chapter 4. It's so cute. I really like it. Wish to read more romantic scenes. And I have a question: Are you (Doubar & MJ) going to post new chapter on every Thursday?
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Post by Doubar on Mar 29, 2013 13:54:18 GMT -5
@ban & MJ: : Guys, guys... you constantly keep forgetting that our dear Firouz invented lots of stuff that we think has been invated in later centuries. So if he's already thought up bicycles, umbrellas, bombs, ruby beamers... you really think he couldn't come up with something simple as fireworks? ;D @ban: Yay, glad you like it. Haha, and don't you worry. I daresay you're in for quite some more romantic scenes. ^^ Yup, I guess we've just made a habit out of posting on Thursdays.  So far we've got about 20 chapters in total - which again means you'll be treated with a weekly dose of romance and/or fun for the next four months. ^^ |
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Post by banmaixanh on Mar 30, 2013 6:42:41 GMT -5
@doubar: Haha. No, I don't forget. And I believe that he cans make the fireworks. With the explosive sticks and the thing in "The Vengeance of Rumina", he already has the good start for the firework. ;D ;D ;D  20 chapters?  ? It's the huge number!!! You two are so amazing. I can never write that much especially the romantic scenes. And great to hear that I don't have to wait long to read the next lovely scenes. And you really make me be curious about the "fun" you mention. |
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Post by Doubar on Mar 30, 2013 9:46:10 GMT -5
. With the explosive sticks and the thing in "The Vengeance of Rumina", he already has the good start for the firework. ;D ;D ;D Aye. Now that's what I thought, too. ;D Well, many of them are rather short so the number of chapters was quite easy to reach. xD But aye, I must admit that, I, too, would surely not have been able to write so many chapters all on my own. But since we were - and still are - writing this together there's always new muse fudge coming our way. After all, more than just once MJ's tag/s triggered a new idea in my own head, and vice versa. Ooh, you'll surely love it. ;D The fun scenes are mostly MJ's doing, so you can imagine how awesome they are. ;D |
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But things are getting better and I actually start to feel like taking up on the game again soon. 
It's not a sillly shot though, but rather a thoughtful one (no gloomy thoughts though, don't you worry 
So far we've got about 20 chapters in total - which again means you'll be treated with a weekly dose of romance and/or fun for the next four months. ^^
? It's the huge number!!! You two are so amazing. I can never write that much especially the romantic scenes. And great to hear that I don't have to wait long to read the next lovely scenes.