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Post by Guest on Mar 16, 2010 4:41:22 GMT -5
Hey just to let you know i have finished my fanfic and the first chapter of Returns is up. And just to let you know that the first few lines are really cheesy.  www.fanfiction.net/s/5820020/1/Returns |
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Post by Guest on Mar 16, 2010 4:50:03 GMT -5
Seems okay to me.  Not cheesy.  I will tell you more when I finish it. But so far, good job.  |
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Post by Doubar on Mar 16, 2010 7:47:11 GMT -5
Aww, great, Thea. Will read it as soon as I got time ... and will of course add your account to our who's who. ;D Oh, and Thea, if you like you can add the little note about you being a member of DL to your profile - just like Modestus, me and Bryn already did. -> example: www.fanfiction.net/u/1483941/TiaKisu (at the bottom of the bio ) |
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Post by Guest on Mar 16, 2010 8:03:34 GMT -5
will do |
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Post by Doubar on Mar 16, 2010 8:15:44 GMT -5
Great. ^^
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Post by 19101989 on Mar 16, 2010 9:21:36 GMT -5
@thea: read and reviewed  really good chapter. Rumina and Bryn face to face is something i wanted to see. can't wait for the upcoming ones. *added to her favorite* |
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Post by Kriss on Mar 16, 2010 10:02:00 GMT -5
@anthea It starts very interesting Me like it Sinbad didn't miss Rumina? Why so? ;D ;D ;D Well done Can't wait for the next chapters |
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Post by Firouz on Mar 16, 2010 12:10:54 GMT -5
Reaelly good! Somehow drwoning or not drowning is not the way I saw Rumina going!
Read and reviewed!
Added to favs too! ;D
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Post by Doubar on Mar 16, 2010 12:52:21 GMT -5
@thea: R&R! Very good start, dear! Go on writing! |
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Post by Guest on Mar 19, 2010 6:40:46 GMT -5
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Post by Doubar on Mar 19, 2010 6:47:52 GMT -5
Aww, will read it as soon as I got time, Thea. |
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Post by 19101989 on Mar 19, 2010 6:52:23 GMT -5
wonderful thea. wonderful. I'll try to read it this evening! |
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Post by Guest on Mar 19, 2010 12:35:03 GMT -5
Yeah, will read it when I got time. ;D |
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Post by 19101989 on Mar 19, 2010 14:46:46 GMT -5
Good chapter anthea, I reviewed. the end was really interesting |
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Not cheesy. 
I will tell you more when I finish it. But so far, good job. 
really good chapter. Rumina and Bryn face to face is something i wanted to see. 
