Fanfiction Ideas & snippets.

[Bryn]

yep

[Guest]

That's great! At least she was happy and did not suffer.

[Bryn]

nope she didnt suffer.

[Doubar]

@wind: Read and reviewed! Nice start I have to say. I like it. Only thing: there were some minor mistakes in it*.

*example: When she rounded the corner and saw a young man dark haired brown eyed man eating breakfast. The man repeats there. But well, don't worry. I only noticed some minor things like that. The read still was good.

[Bryn]

thanks dear, ill fix it when i come home from my exam if i can figure out how

[Doubar]

Yet another exam this week? Aww, my poor one. *hugs in sympathy* And I can show you how to fix it, if you like.

[Bryn]

Ya, *hugs* this one is math. it wont be that bad.

[Doubar]

Awww, good luck on it then, honey. *crosses fingers*

[Doubar]

@wind: I'm gonna open a new thread in the member's area and show you how to update/adjust your fic there, okay?

[Guest]

And to be picky, it is "young man, dark haired and brown eyed," or "young man who had dark hair and brown eyes," or "a dark haired and brown eyed young man." I like the last one.

[Doubar]

@sarah: Well, I think wind in fact had the latter one in mind but simply messed up a little.

[Guest]

Aye, but she would need to add the commas if she wants to use the first.

[Bryn]

*rolls eyes* So i wasnt thorough enough in the spell checking.

[Doubar]

*pats back* Awww, there there wind. You know Sarah is picky when it comes to this. Btw.: the thread is up.

[Bryn]

ya i was just on it nice job