Post by 19101989 on Jan 9, 2010 6:08:29 GMT -5
here is a version i will put for discussion about how Bryn meet her nameless guy. i thought it will be better if it is discussed as it is also dealing with the characters ages.
as according to this version Bryn,s age was 13th and rumina was 16 so maeve can be between 13 or 14 or 15 and i think in that case all of them would not be so young when the attack happened. this version will complete the other version of the whole bio but without revenge. so what do you think and of course Sarah what do you think?
here
"Bryn was born to a white sorcerer who descended from a series of dark sorcerers. He had two daughters. After his wife died he lost hope and turned to the dark side. Her older sis was very near from her dad. He began to teach both of them dark arts. After that Bryn was a little child who treated with everything as a game. She had a pure heart, a one that belonged to an innocent child. She began to do exactly what her father tells her. She was a bout 8 years old when her father went to attack another village as usual. She was very excited because her father promised her that after that attack he will allow her and her sister to do and attack villages by them selves. She was so excited because her sister rumina told her a lot about the exciting things she saw her father do while attacking the villages, when he took her once to prepare her when she was in Bryn's age. She told her about the treasures, the obedient and frightened looks the people were throwing her father with and that proved how powerful their father is. One day when her time came to let Bryn and rumina go together for attacking villages he insisted to go with them for their first time. There in the village they were attacking. Bryn was fascinated with all this power and all this frightened –respectful-as she mistaken it with her child mind. she was very curious child and wanted to make a quick exploration to the village with her own especially that her family did not seem to pay much attention to her during their attack She let her family attack the rest of the village and she went away to try to try the powers taught by her father. She wandered around the attacked village when something attracted her sight. A house which remained closed- door during the attack. That was normal as she noticed that all the people in the village hurried to their houses to hide there or leave their houses totally for turok to take what he needs.she formed a little magical fire in her hand to attack this house. Immediately the door of this house opened violently. She automatically hide so no one see her and wondered about who dared to get out. Then she noticed a boy about two or three ages ahead of her arguing violently with his mother who tried to convince him in fear to retreat and stop what foolish thing he is going to do. She heard murmurs from the boy swearing that he will challenge turok, because he is evil and wanted to take their possessions without right. Then he left his mother calling him from behind. Bryn forgot totally about the ready-burning magic she prepared for attacking this house during her shock from the courage of this guy. The fire began to crawl till she began to feel her skin burning. A scream left her mouth faintly and she quickly turned of the magical fire at the same time when this boy was passing next to her in his rush to find Turok. He heard her scream. She noticed that and tried to hide herself more. The courage she saw from that boy frightened her. She was a pampered girl who used to hear always the words of obedience paid to her father. Her childhood fear covered her and this little magician to be turned immediately to a frightened girl. The boy was approaching from her hiding place to know who was there. He finally managed to see the little brunette. The cautious features on his face turned to be a puzzled one. He stretched his arm to the little frightened girl to help her out of her hiding while telling her that everything is okay. To Bryn's shock she realized that he thought that she was one of the village's children. She looked at his face, which now turned from the angry one to comfortable one. She looked at his stretching hands asking her to come out. She found herself stretch her unburned hand in turn and allowed him to pull her out. He looked at her and began to ask her where she came from, and who her parents were. She was very shy to answer his question especially after what she heard. This boy was an enemy to her father and of course an enemy to her. She has to destroy him. But he was very kind and something deep in his eyes told her that he is a little boy just like her. May be he is afraid too. She remembered what her father told her about being strong and treating the others like slaves to her. She thought that boy was enemy so he should be destroyed. She began unconsciously to form a magic fire in her unhurt hand behind her back so the boy would not notice. But out of blue, the boy grabbed her burnt arm when he noticed it and she unconsciously turned off the magic fire on the other hand surprised by his move. He asked her with concern about who did that to her. And before she can answer he cut off a part of his clothes and motioned to Bryn to sit on a nearby rock and give him her burnt arm. She was shocked. No one before showed such concern to her. She was sure that her father loved her but he was always talking with her about the dark magic and power. When she got hurt she learnt to heal herself and even her sister rumina did not seem to pay much attention when she got hurt as if it was something important for her to grow blunt. She was now a complete child. She did as he told her and then he looked at her with a warm smile telling her that she will not feel anything. And he began to encourage her while he was wrapping the cloth around her arm, the arm which wanted to burn him and his family few moments ago. He told her that he knew that she must get hurt from one of this evil sorcerer attacks who do not seem to differ between a child and adult. He then noticed that she was like mute. But he said that she must be very afraid of what was happening. So he told her to go and hide in his house with his mother and his sisters and motioned to the spot where his house was. And then he patted her hair and said that he will not be able to escort her to his house because he promised to get rid of this sorcerer first and not go home without achieving that. Then he kissed her forehead and set off. Now Bryn was in a huge maze.this boy treated her very well. He was no evil. He showed her tenderness although he did not know her but after a few minutes. And he was going to challenge her father. She fell in gab between what was wrong and what was right. Her little mind could not absorb the fact that all these people feared from her father because he was more like a thief. She sat there like a statue. She could not dare to show her face to her father because she felt that she let him down by not attacking this house and at the same time she could not head to this house to simply hide there like this little boy told her. She was the one who was attacking. She lost track of time and suddenly her sister rumina showed in front of her and asked her worriedly about her place all this time. Her father was asking for them to go home after they got what they want. Her sister told her that they –rumi and her father- had a good laugh today when a small little boy came to challenge her father. Bryn did not lose much time to know who the challenger was as his piece of clothing were wrapping around her wrist now. She asked her sister hesitantly about what had happened feeling that her little heart beating madly. Rumina told her with no real interest tone that her father of course took him as a slave. After that Turok admired the little boy courage so he decided to make him a special guardian to the girls. That is when he was presented to the two sisters and he quickly recognized Bryn. It was a huge shock. He tried to be away from Bryn for a while. But then she tried to talk to him while her father or her sister was busy. Gradually he began to form a soft spot toward the little girl, who was still keeping the part of cloth he gave her. Although they did not spend too much time together but both of them felt deeply the innocence lied deep within them and began to pay much attention toward each other. Then when it was Bryn's 13th birthday turok Decided to send her and the 16th years old rumina to Maeve,s village to destroy it. Bryn tried to protest but her father's and her sister word leaved no place for discussion."
sorry if there are many spelling errors as i wrote it very quickly.
and here is the full version for who does not read it
"
Bryn,s drift:
"okay
here
First of all that man was a child okay? When he was a child turok attacked his village and destroyed it. Okay? He took some children as salves. he saw that this child was smart and have a well-tuned body so he decided to raise him up. Then he was presented to the two dark girls. He did not have a good interest in both of them at all especially the older one as she was a lot like her father. But he gradually began to be attracted to the younger sis who seemed to hide a great innocence inside her and he felt that she was forced to do like her father and sis. He grows up with the two girls as a slave for them. He kept always an eye on Bryn and they both shared some innocent time together as the little Bryn developed a soft spot toward the always silent and handsome boy. Then when she reached 13 and attacked maeve,s village and lost her memories ,so on, That little boy tried to search for the girl he cared for but his age limits hinder him from that. He grew up and his revenge and love quest grew with him. He could not forget about Bryn at all. But he figured that it will be better for him to be with rumina and turok side as that way he can achieve his revenge quest and at the same time if he heard something about Bryn he could go and get her back .turok was beheaded and rumina became in charge. He pretended that he is one of rumina, s loyal men. And she began to trust him but he can not get from the dark woman because she was very powerful and there is still Bryn who he is trying to find a track on her place. One day after the cooperation between plunkete and rumi. She sent him in a spy mission over the nomad crew. He can hide in one of the crew men and he then saw Bryn. He doubted about her identity at first as he could not remember the little child in a young woman shape. But then he heard some rumors about her. And the way they find her and her name. Then he will be sure that she is the one who was searching for. That is what I can get to now. Please understand it."
Of course No thing will be done without having turok and rumi,s say in that matter.
as according to this version Bryn,s age was 13th and rumina was 16 so maeve can be between 13 or 14 or 15 and i think in that case all of them would not be so young when the attack happened. this version will complete the other version of the whole bio but without revenge. so what do you think and of course Sarah what do you think?
here
"Bryn was born to a white sorcerer who descended from a series of dark sorcerers. He had two daughters. After his wife died he lost hope and turned to the dark side. Her older sis was very near from her dad. He began to teach both of them dark arts. After that Bryn was a little child who treated with everything as a game. She had a pure heart, a one that belonged to an innocent child. She began to do exactly what her father tells her. She was a bout 8 years old when her father went to attack another village as usual. She was very excited because her father promised her that after that attack he will allow her and her sister to do and attack villages by them selves. She was so excited because her sister rumina told her a lot about the exciting things she saw her father do while attacking the villages, when he took her once to prepare her when she was in Bryn's age. She told her about the treasures, the obedient and frightened looks the people were throwing her father with and that proved how powerful their father is. One day when her time came to let Bryn and rumina go together for attacking villages he insisted to go with them for their first time. There in the village they were attacking. Bryn was fascinated with all this power and all this frightened –respectful-as she mistaken it with her child mind. she was very curious child and wanted to make a quick exploration to the village with her own especially that her family did not seem to pay much attention to her during their attack She let her family attack the rest of the village and she went away to try to try the powers taught by her father. She wandered around the attacked village when something attracted her sight. A house which remained closed- door during the attack. That was normal as she noticed that all the people in the village hurried to their houses to hide there or leave their houses totally for turok to take what he needs.she formed a little magical fire in her hand to attack this house. Immediately the door of this house opened violently. She automatically hide so no one see her and wondered about who dared to get out. Then she noticed a boy about two or three ages ahead of her arguing violently with his mother who tried to convince him in fear to retreat and stop what foolish thing he is going to do. She heard murmurs from the boy swearing that he will challenge turok, because he is evil and wanted to take their possessions without right. Then he left his mother calling him from behind. Bryn forgot totally about the ready-burning magic she prepared for attacking this house during her shock from the courage of this guy. The fire began to crawl till she began to feel her skin burning. A scream left her mouth faintly and she quickly turned of the magical fire at the same time when this boy was passing next to her in his rush to find Turok. He heard her scream. She noticed that and tried to hide herself more. The courage she saw from that boy frightened her. She was a pampered girl who used to hear always the words of obedience paid to her father. Her childhood fear covered her and this little magician to be turned immediately to a frightened girl. The boy was approaching from her hiding place to know who was there. He finally managed to see the little brunette. The cautious features on his face turned to be a puzzled one. He stretched his arm to the little frightened girl to help her out of her hiding while telling her that everything is okay. To Bryn's shock she realized that he thought that she was one of the village's children. She looked at his face, which now turned from the angry one to comfortable one. She looked at his stretching hands asking her to come out. She found herself stretch her unburned hand in turn and allowed him to pull her out. He looked at her and began to ask her where she came from, and who her parents were. She was very shy to answer his question especially after what she heard. This boy was an enemy to her father and of course an enemy to her. She has to destroy him. But he was very kind and something deep in his eyes told her that he is a little boy just like her. May be he is afraid too. She remembered what her father told her about being strong and treating the others like slaves to her. She thought that boy was enemy so he should be destroyed. She began unconsciously to form a magic fire in her unhurt hand behind her back so the boy would not notice. But out of blue, the boy grabbed her burnt arm when he noticed it and she unconsciously turned off the magic fire on the other hand surprised by his move. He asked her with concern about who did that to her. And before she can answer he cut off a part of his clothes and motioned to Bryn to sit on a nearby rock and give him her burnt arm. She was shocked. No one before showed such concern to her. She was sure that her father loved her but he was always talking with her about the dark magic and power. When she got hurt she learnt to heal herself and even her sister rumina did not seem to pay much attention when she got hurt as if it was something important for her to grow blunt. She was now a complete child. She did as he told her and then he looked at her with a warm smile telling her that she will not feel anything. And he began to encourage her while he was wrapping the cloth around her arm, the arm which wanted to burn him and his family few moments ago. He told her that he knew that she must get hurt from one of this evil sorcerer attacks who do not seem to differ between a child and adult. He then noticed that she was like mute. But he said that she must be very afraid of what was happening. So he told her to go and hide in his house with his mother and his sisters and motioned to the spot where his house was. And then he patted her hair and said that he will not be able to escort her to his house because he promised to get rid of this sorcerer first and not go home without achieving that. Then he kissed her forehead and set off. Now Bryn was in a huge maze.this boy treated her very well. He was no evil. He showed her tenderness although he did not know her but after a few minutes. And he was going to challenge her father. She fell in gab between what was wrong and what was right. Her little mind could not absorb the fact that all these people feared from her father because he was more like a thief. She sat there like a statue. She could not dare to show her face to her father because she felt that she let him down by not attacking this house and at the same time she could not head to this house to simply hide there like this little boy told her. She was the one who was attacking. She lost track of time and suddenly her sister rumina showed in front of her and asked her worriedly about her place all this time. Her father was asking for them to go home after they got what they want. Her sister told her that they –rumi and her father- had a good laugh today when a small little boy came to challenge her father. Bryn did not lose much time to know who the challenger was as his piece of clothing were wrapping around her wrist now. She asked her sister hesitantly about what had happened feeling that her little heart beating madly. Rumina told her with no real interest tone that her father of course took him as a slave. After that Turok admired the little boy courage so he decided to make him a special guardian to the girls. That is when he was presented to the two sisters and he quickly recognized Bryn. It was a huge shock. He tried to be away from Bryn for a while. But then she tried to talk to him while her father or her sister was busy. Gradually he began to form a soft spot toward the little girl, who was still keeping the part of cloth he gave her. Although they did not spend too much time together but both of them felt deeply the innocence lied deep within them and began to pay much attention toward each other. Then when it was Bryn's 13th birthday turok Decided to send her and the 16th years old rumina to Maeve,s village to destroy it. Bryn tried to protest but her father's and her sister word leaved no place for discussion."
sorry if there are many spelling errors as i wrote it very quickly.
and here is the full version for who does not read it
"
Bryn,s drift:
"okay
here
First of all that man was a child okay? When he was a child turok attacked his village and destroyed it. Okay? He took some children as salves. he saw that this child was smart and have a well-tuned body so he decided to raise him up. Then he was presented to the two dark girls. He did not have a good interest in both of them at all especially the older one as she was a lot like her father. But he gradually began to be attracted to the younger sis who seemed to hide a great innocence inside her and he felt that she was forced to do like her father and sis. He grows up with the two girls as a slave for them. He kept always an eye on Bryn and they both shared some innocent time together as the little Bryn developed a soft spot toward the always silent and handsome boy. Then when she reached 13 and attacked maeve,s village and lost her memories ,so on, That little boy tried to search for the girl he cared for but his age limits hinder him from that. He grew up and his revenge and love quest grew with him. He could not forget about Bryn at all. But he figured that it will be better for him to be with rumina and turok side as that way he can achieve his revenge quest and at the same time if he heard something about Bryn he could go and get her back .turok was beheaded and rumina became in charge. He pretended that he is one of rumina, s loyal men. And she began to trust him but he can not get from the dark woman because she was very powerful and there is still Bryn who he is trying to find a track on her place. One day after the cooperation between plunkete and rumi. She sent him in a spy mission over the nomad crew. He can hide in one of the crew men and he then saw Bryn. He doubted about her identity at first as he could not remember the little child in a young woman shape. But then he heard some rumors about her. And the way they find her and her name. Then he will be sure that she is the one who was searching for. That is what I can get to now. Please understand it."
Of course No thing will be done without having turok and rumi,s say in that matter.
Her father was no where near in sight and would not know if she destroyed the house or not. And he did not tell her to destroy the house. And why can she not hide in his house? She is just a little girl to him.
and she can not hide there because she felt that she is the one who should attack not hide that what her father taught her.
