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Post by Guest on Jan 6, 2010 16:06:32 GMT -5
I think this is a sensitive topic and we should keep in mind what is acceptable for both sides here. Let´s not start to argue about it. This is a cross cultural thing here which can be solved otherwise but most of all with keeping clear lines. I am not arguing, Mr. Bad. If this seems arguing, then how do you debate a subject?
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Post by Doubar on Jan 6, 2010 16:07:07 GMT -5
*is not Bryn but tries to explain how she got it* Well, what I think Bryn wanted to express: that guy was a slave - being taken by Turok after he became evil. Since the boy showed some talent in fighting/was strong or maybe impressed Turok in another way, he instead of killing him or whatever, took him as a slave and exercised(/got him exercised) him to be sort of a bodyguard for his children (or maybe even for the younger Bryn only). The guy would grow fond of his protégé and they fell in love. Knowing however that neither Rumina nor Turok would allow the two of them to be together (he is just a slave after all) the two of them have to keep it a secret. Then the story goes on as we planned: the attack, Bryn gets lost. Now, well I have to ask at that point: did the dark family think Bryn to be dead or did they leave her on purpose? In the first case, the guy could simply have went on living and serving but never truly forgetting about Bryn. Since he had been Bryn's bodyguard, he now was kinda of no use anymore and that's why he became a lower servant of Rumina (hence why we never saw him before). Then during the planning for the thing in Basra, he gets to know that Bryn is still alive and tries to get to her. But knowing Rumina won't free him of his service for her, he volunteers or talks her into being a spy (or maybe even she does decide on this on her own [after all she didn't know about the relationship], dunno). He would get to Basra and hire on the Nomad, not daring to shock Bryn with the revelation of who they were, he stays silent and plays the "double agent" for some time for he knows that Rumi will watch him in what he does. alex: Did I explain that correctly?
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Post by Sinbad on Jan 6, 2010 16:11:46 GMT -5
I think this is a sensitive topic and we should keep in mind what is acceptable for both sides here. Let´s not start to argue about it. This is a cross cultural thing here which can be solved otherwise but most of all with keeping clear lines. I am not arguing, Mr. Bad. If this seems arguing, then how do you debate a subject? I was just making sure that things are okay. Some subjects are a little touchy and sometimes there are misunderstandings without anyone knowing how it came to it because of that. This is why I stepped in, not to step on anyone´s toes.
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Post by 19101989 on Jan 6, 2010 16:34:51 GMT -5
okay here
First of all that man was a child okay? When he was a child turok attacked his village and destroyed it. Okay? He took some children as salves. he saw that this child was smart and have a well-tuned body so he decided to raise him up. The little boy who saw his village and his parents burned and slaughtered decided to have revenge from turok and kept that promise deep within him to achieve his quest when he have the chance to. Then he was presented to the two dark girls. He did not have a good interest in both of them at all especially the older one as she was a lot like her father. But he gradually began to be attracted to the younger sis which seemed to hide a great innocence inside her and he felt that she was forced to do like her father and sis. He grow up with the two girls as a slave for them. He kept always an eye on Bryn and they both shared some innocent time together as the little Bryn developed a soft spot toward the always silent and handsome boy. Then when she reached 8 and attacked maeve,s village and lost her memories ,so on, That little boy tried to search for the girl he cared for but his age limits hinder him from that. He grew up and his revenge and love quest grew with him. He could not forget about Bryn at all. But he figured that it will be better for him to be with rumina and turok side as that way he can achieve his revenge quest and at the same time if he heard something about Bryn he could go and get her back .turok was beheaded and rumina became in charge. He pretended that he is one of rumina, s loyal men. And she began to trust him but he can not get from the dark woman because she was very powerful and there is still Bryn who he is trying to find a track on her place. One day after the cooperation between plunkete and rumi. She sent him in a spy mission over the nomad crew. He can hide in one of the crew men and he then saw Bryn. He doubted about her identity at first as he could not remember the little child in a young woman shape. But then he heard some rumors about her. And the way they find her and her name. Then he will be sure that she is the one who was searching for. That is what I can get to now. Please understand it.
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Post by 19101989 on Jan 6, 2010 16:47:29 GMT -5
Perfect doubar!
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Post by Maeve on Jan 6, 2010 17:25:37 GMT -5
Whooo! Me likes this "double-agent" plot line! Me likes it very much! I can't wait to see how this new romance plays out!
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Post by Doubar on Jan 6, 2010 17:28:13 GMT -5
alex. Good that I got it right. Even though the version you just posted does in deed differ a bit from how I got it. And, well, in one point I have to agree with Mody I have to admit: I wouldn't focus all too much on the seeking revenge part. We already got Maeve and Sarah seeking for revenge (and Kahlan in some way, too), so I wouldn't emphasize that one too much. I mean sure, he can hate the dark sorcerers for making him be a slave, but this does not always mean seeking revenge as well (to my opinion that is *shrugs*). Instead I would focus his attempts on breaking free from the slavery and living a free life (just a suggestion of course ). Oh, one general thing though: hasn't Bryn been older when the whole thing in the village happened? I have to admit I do not remember right now on what we did settle.
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Post by 19101989 on Jan 6, 2010 17:31:23 GMT -5
Rumina; whoooooooooo a new banner. this one is awesome @doubar: okay i agree perfectly and totally to your plot. he can not seek for revenge. but is not being a slave will make him did? and what about that he will try to join the crew? i mean temporarily he will fight on their side Rumina: those lines there are very good and carry a lot of inspiration.well done
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Post by Doubar on Jan 6, 2010 17:55:48 GMT -5
alex: Well, as I see it, he would hate being a slave but his main goal would not be seeking revenge, but breaking free. He would in the end for sure fight alongside the crew (assuming Bryn will stay on the good side and with the crew) and thus against the dark sorcerers, but this shouldn't be his main goal I think. And well, following the double-agent line he would try and get assigned to the Nomad (which of course would work *loves the almighty author powers ^^*). There he for some time simply sails among the crew and ... hum, now for the first time I stumble across a little snag: why should Rumi send a spy to be with the crew. She can watch them in her pool after all. On the other hand ... hehe, she has more important things to do than sitting infront of that pool all day. So a spy could report what her dear sister is doing all day long. And yeah, this would be the time during which he is a double agent of some sort. And well, when Rumi finally spills everything (I mean Bryn's heritage) and the brunette's memories come back to her, she will remember him and their love. And depending on the circumstances, either they would make a wrong move (confessing their feelings while Rumi secretly watches them) or in some other way Rumi gets to know of the relationship. What follows however would be totally up to coincidence and you players. He and Bryn could simply break away from Rumi and Turok, or Rumi and Turok could even accept this (depending on how the two of them plan to develop the family story); or he could even be taken back to Rumi's castle (magically of course) ... and, hehe, nice twist, could be cursed (like Talya). Just some ideas. *shrugs* *ponders* And I just get to notice: you're maneuvring yourself into quite some havoc there with this story. For once Bryn gets her memories back, she will one: suffer from the fight of light and darkness deep inside herself and two: will at the same time remember that lost love. Whoa ... that's gonna be an emotional chaos. xD
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Post by 19101989 on Jan 6, 2010 18:25:18 GMT -5
@doubar: completely agreed to what you said and okay no problem for me to make him just try to sit himself free . Now we will wait for Sarah. the thing i fear most . just thinking that we will have to argue again . i told you in the past that i wanted to torture the Brunette a little first ;D but seems i tortured my pretty brunette a lot. *horrible dark experience, fainting.,horrible past,. lost love., *
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Post by Rongar on Jan 6, 2010 19:16:47 GMT -5
Question...just how old were Rumina and Bryn and Maeve and Dermott for the villageattack? And now, how old is this new character?
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Post by Maeve on Jan 6, 2010 21:23:41 GMT -5
Well, personally, I always saw it as though they were teens/young adults when it all happened...around 14-16 years old...That's the year range that feels the most logical to me.
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Post by Guest on Jan 6, 2010 23:00:03 GMT -5
Question...just how old were Rumina and Bryn and Maeve and Dermott for the villageattack? And now, how old is this new character? Oh, and one more thing, Rumina was 9, and Bryn was 6 when she attacked my village, making me 11 when I was supposed to be married. And when they attacked Maeve's village, Rumina was 13, and Bryn was 8, making Maeve 9. That makes Dermott 3, which sounds logical because I can imagine a toddler being fearless.
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Post by Guest on Jan 6, 2010 23:09:20 GMT -5
no problem for me to make him just try to sit himself free . First off, you are not MAKING him do anything. It is my character. You have little say. And I was asking you about it because you asked if I could play a male character. Now why should you fear me. You need to communicate with me and we need to agree on things if you what me to do this. And sorry, I still have problems. Will think about it.
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Post by 19101989 on Jan 7, 2010 5:13:53 GMT -5
no problem for me to make him just try to sit himself free . First off, you are not MAKING him do anything. It is my character. You have little say. And I was asking you about it because you asked if I could play a male character. Now why should you fear me. You need to communicate with me and we need to agree on things if you what me to do this. And sorry, I still have problems. Will think about it. Okay I know that but as I am the person or my inner Brunette who will have to interact with that "guy" I think it is very IMPORTANT for me to accept him and feel comfortable with him . but no problem take your time i am not in rush now as I have to focus on my exams.
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