Characters up for grabs!

[stinky cheese man]

@nili: Yes, and you like to go on and on. I can relate your story to Fellowship of the Rings, although I think I already told you. Man, that was a long and sometimes boring movie. But no, your story is not boring.

[Sinbad]

*chuckles* Actually, there can hardly be a better compliment for me than to compare my scribblings to that of Tolkien. ;D

[stinky cheese man]

Glad you don't take if as and offense. And where's our next chapter. You so much like to torture us. And yeah, I updated before you. ;D

[Sinbad]

Nah, I don´t take it as an offence.
And yeah, I know. :/ But I´m so awfully stuck up in work these days. I´m still working right and this has been another dreadfully busy work. I wish I had time to find my muse.

[stinky cheese man]

@nili: I am in the same boat. ;D But as you know me, I am a character by nature, so it doesn't take much effort to find my muse. ;D

[Doubar]

@whisper: Well, guess tha major point has been already explained here. But, well, yeah, I, too am a fan of some desciptions. After all I guess you and random readers might like to know just what my character feels/think, what he notices and why in the end he then says what he says. It's not everyboy's liking to write like that, I know, and just like Mody alsready said: just use/develop your own style.

[19101989]

@doubar : i know tubby but sometimes u can read a fic full of description but makes u in the core of the events BUT in other side u can read another fic full of description but make u out of the track for example when u read a fic and the character said something and u wanna know what the other will respond u will find tons of description words hinder your way and of course u have to read them but sometimes i skip most of them
really we can differ in opinions but its OK DESCRIPTIONS ALSO HAS different WAYS AND TYPES
by the way i am not a random reader -if it is the way i understand - may be i am not a writer but i read tons of them that i can describe my self as a one of bigger fan of fan fictions if something like that can exist and most of the fics i read i criticized to their authors

[stinky cheese man]

@whisper: Oh, one more thing, about the baddies, well Scratch is here, so you can talk with him. After all, all you have to do is call. ;D But somehow you would have to get to know Scratch first. The dream I mentioned before distandlands.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=fun&action=display&thread=216&page=1 may work perfectly, although it won't be physical fighting action, more like bickering, or fighting with words.

[19101989]

@stinky : yeah it would be a good idea even to know more about scratch words in hell house
about the dream i will TRY to read but as i said i do not have the good time to begin more than popping from time to time so please forgive me and i accept all your suggestions but give me the chance and the time do not use the sand glass against me * looks to the pile of books and shakes her head in rage *

[stinky cheese man]

@whisper: Okay, but I don't think Sinbad is going to change her style. And since I used limited descriptions for Bryn, the transition would work well. A little description is needed to show the character's actions. I did not go took much in the thought process. And again, write like you are the character. If it is easier, think of Sinbad as your friend and Scratch as your enemy. How would you describe your actions and thoughts. What do you do? What do you think? And what do you say?

[stinky cheese man]

@whisper: Yes, no pressure. And I never moped with Bryn. That's Sinbad's job. But anyway, we are through with the moping stage. In the dream, I was bickering/teasing with Scratch, similar to what Maeve did with Sinbad.

[19101989]

Nov 13, 2009 3:56:05 GMT -5 @stinky cheese man said:

@whisper: Yes, no pressure. And I never moped with Bryn. That's Sinbad's job. But anyway, we are through with the moping stage. In the dream, I was bickering/teasing with Scratch, similar to what Maeve did with Sinbad.

@stinky : really ! when did that happen ? i mean maeve/sinbad ?
ach !! i really can not find my way through this sum of threads

[19101989]

@stinky : u never cease to amaze me with your care
i love long journey home and as sinbad said it is okay with the criticism when it is builder...right ?

[stinky cheese man]

@whisper: Oh, I think I see your problem. Here, distandlands.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=plot&action=display&thread=94&page=1 . This is the timeline in which the threads should take place. Read the threads chronologically in the order of the timeline. And my dream chat with Scratch distandlands.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=fun&action=display&thread=216&page=1 was supposed to go after the tavern - inside the Crown of Ogotay thread, where Bryn may also have a chat with Caipra after everybody leaves, according to my plan. But since the conversation with Scratch involves only Bryn, it can happen simultaneously. I did it just because Scratch really wanted to rp, and Bryn was really the only one that sounded local (since all the baddies are away ). And it is nice to bicker with someone. Just read my conversation with Scratch. You might enjoy it. I add a little humor. ;D

[stinky cheese man]

Nov 13, 2009 4:08:57 GMT -5 @19101989 said:

@stinky : u never cease to amaze me with your care
i love long journey home and as sinbad said it is okay with the criticism when it is builder...right ?

My pleasure, my sweet. *kisses her hand* (I really get spoiled here. ;D And yes, I criticize a lot of people. Just have to remember not to make it to harsh.