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Post by Firouz on Dec 8, 2014 18:17:37 GMT -5
Ban, yes, we are talking about rice.
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Post by Firouz on Dec 7, 2014 10:45:53 GMT -5
Do you have a lot of rice to use on call, Doubar? You could submerge the laptop in it to remove ANY remaining moisture.
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Post by Firouz on Dec 4, 2014 21:02:52 GMT -5
Looks like we're nearly done!
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Post by Firouz on Dec 3, 2014 18:24:51 GMT -5
I'll go for 10 please!
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Post by Firouz on Sept 11, 2014 17:24:57 GMT -5
No problem!
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Post by Firouz on Sept 10, 2014 20:25:17 GMT -5
(((HUGS))) Thanks Eleana!
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Post by Firouz on Sept 10, 2014 16:53:22 GMT -5
Possibly, but I don't know which episode either way....
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Post by Firouz on Sept 10, 2014 16:52:10 GMT -5
You are writing a great fic, but it needs to be shown not exactly told. Like when they are all in dialogue, have the characters express their emotions on their faces or turn the fic into a first person POV for a short time; to show how the characters are feeling about the events instead of telling through their words. Hope it helps. Sam
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Post by Firouz on Sept 9, 2014 17:06:25 GMT -5
It looks like Tets is the owner of the song bite.
Also, it sounds like a scene full of birds....maybe from Still Life? The crackling/foot steps sounds I can't place....except maybe when all the other actors/servants are awakened???
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Post by Firouz on Sept 9, 2014 17:01:42 GMT -5
I like how everyone is waiting and ready to offer Sinbad help to go after the weapon! I also like how Turhan and Tetsu are going! LOL And how Sinbad thanks the people for the help, but makes them stay to protect the city for their return! Every job is important after all.
My only critique, is that is needs to be fleshed out more; the story is great, but more details would make it AWESOME!
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Post by Firouz on Sept 8, 2014 18:34:22 GMT -5
I don't recall either or about the curse, but both would probably be adequate reasons why.
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Post by Firouz on Jun 25, 2014 19:20:47 GMT -5
Your story is great; I can't wait to read more of it.
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Post by Firouz on Jun 25, 2014 19:19:09 GMT -5
Yea, the movie shows a very different side to Maleficent and it is a really good movie. One that makes you feel badly for ever thinking she was an evil person to being with. I really liked it; you will too, trust me!
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Post by Firouz on Jun 23, 2014 17:11:33 GMT -5
@sinbad, yes, I have seen it; you are right it does leave people silent and profoundly effected.
It hits more emotionally here (America) as it wasn't so very long ago.....
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As for me this past weekend I watched Maleficent with Angelina Jolie and How to Train your Dragon 2! LOVED THEM BOTH!!! Maleficent shows a very different side to the fairytale and I LOVED it!
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Post by Firouz on Jun 23, 2014 16:46:08 GMT -5
Right now, I'm falling in love with the BBC America's The Three Musketeers! Handsome guys, sword fights, strong women, a weak-willed prince, AWESOMENESS!!!!!!!
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