Long Journey home by Niliathiel

[Dermott]

Long Journey Home

by Niliathiel

www.fanfiction.net/s/4166364/1/Long_journey_home






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I was thinking about open this tread for a while (and with Nili permission of course)

I thought that having a whole area dedicated AOS fanFictions, it would have been nice to open single treads at least for stories with a lot of chapters. So we can discuss about those ones as soon as one has the time to read them ;D

Considering that we don't have spoiler tags, I'll use the quote-tag with above the title of each episode as a substitute.

I'm really enjoyng this story

[Dermott]

13 - One Lucky Girl

I like how in this chapter Maeve is starting to sense something for him, as if story was repeating itself. The only difference now it’s that Sinbad is perfectly aware of his feeling. Soo sad.

14 – Power Struggles

A place were children never saw a moor? It’s somewhere in North Europe Nili?
Mmm I’m starting to wonder if somebody, or some evil spirit has possessed kareem’s body.

15 - Kareem’s sacrifice

>I really like the way Sinbad is dealing with his role as a captain. He is growing up, he has still the impulsiveness of season one, but something of the tempered Captain of S1 is coming back. In a better way ^.^

>Just a personal thought. Kareem irritates me.

>Oh, God, No!!! A mutiny. Poor Sinbad, after all he is going through

>Oh.. Maeve is worried.

>Ah, I finally understand. Poor kids -_-‘

>LOL. Now I can picture Eris and Rumina drinking tea together while chatting about the troubles they are going to create.

>Oh….the ending……..I’m shocked. Poor Captainn…Poor kids…

[firouz]

@dermott: Question, are those your reviews from fanfiction.net?

[Sinbad]

Aw, thanks Derm
Firouz: If I recall correctly, these are not from ff.net but comments that she just wrote here.

[Dermott]

No, I'm reading the fic right now, and I'm commenting in this moment

I had a ff.net account in the past, (I used it just to fave stories), but I've lost the password ;D

[firouz]

Did you try the password lookup?

[Dermott]

Yes, some time ago. But it didn't work. I should give it another try

[firouz]

Let me no if it worked. If not, you are free to post here. I am sure Nili won't mind.

[Guest]

Waiting, and waiting, and waiting.

Tick-tock, Tick-tock, tick-Tock

One Mississippi, two Mississippi, three Mississippi................

[Guest]

Waiting, and waiting, and waiting.

Tick-tock, Tick-tock, tick-Tock

One Mississippi, two Mississippi, three Mississippi................

[Sinbad]

Actually, I know. But right now I do not have the muse for that story, therefore nagging won´t exactly help, since I will only write when the muse strikes me. If I do without that, it will turn out crap.

[Guest]

Okay, I'll be waiting for eternity. ;D