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Post by Doubar on Jan 16, 2010 16:52:20 GMT -5
Haha! Great! I can so picture Maeve pretending not to be jealous. ;D The only thing I find a little odd at the moment is the two starting a magical fight only because of this. But I can very well picture Taven and Maeve starting to bicker/argue. Plus, I don't know much about Taven and the way he and Maeve usually interact till now (and how could I x) ), so maybe that works jsut well.  ;D |
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Post by Bryn on Jan 16, 2010 16:57:10 GMT -5
ha ha thanks. i havent decided fully yet whether or not Taven has magical powers. but in this scene we will say he does.
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Post by Guest on Jan 16, 2010 17:12:34 GMT -5
ha ha thanks. i havent decided fully yet whether or not Taven has magical powers. but in this scene we will say he does. The only thing, isn't forming a fireball a little intense.  I would think Taven to just deflect or shield against Maeve's magic. But I love the bickering. ;D |
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Post by Bryn on Jan 16, 2010 20:29:42 GMT -5
well maybe it was just an example.
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Post by Guest on Jan 16, 2010 20:32:08 GMT -5
Okay, just an idea in progress. And remember, in the end, this is YOUR story, so YOU have the final say. |
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Post by Bryn on Jan 16, 2010 20:55:41 GMT -5
ya. i know thanks tho for the ideas
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Post by Guest on Jan 16, 2010 21:14:03 GMT -5
Anytime. |
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Post by Bryn on Jan 18, 2010 6:43:07 GMT -5
*rolls over in bed* grumples "stubid mondays" and goes back to sleep
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Post by Guest on Jan 18, 2010 10:21:13 GMT -5
I have holiday!  No school! And how is your fic going? |
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Post by Bryn on Jan 18, 2010 15:46:41 GMT -5
ya i know lucky you, o well just three more weeks then i have a holiday! my fic is coming along but i wont have much time to work on it because of school assignments
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Post by Guest on Jan 18, 2010 15:58:47 GMT -5
Okay. School comes first. I can wait three weeks. After all, I have been waiting for Nili's Long Journey Home for eternity.  |
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Post by Bryn on Jan 18, 2010 16:11:25 GMT -5
ha ha. ill present chapter 1 when its done.
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Post by Guest on Jan 18, 2010 16:18:04 GMT -5
ha ha. ill present chapter 1 when its done. Okay. Can't wait , but I can wait for three weeks or so. No rush. |
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Post by Bryn on Jan 18, 2010 17:05:23 GMT -5
he he thanks
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Post by 19101989 on Jan 21, 2010 7:00:35 GMT -5
*looks at turok in joyful disbelief * so you finally made it!!!!!!!  you updated your story *hugs Turok dearly * you're awesome |
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I would think Taven to just deflect or shield against Maeve's magic.
No school! 
you updated your story *hugs Turok dearly * you're awesome