About my character(Kriss de Valnor)

[alex]

So, will you just be in Basra, because we probably will be sailing around?

[Kriss]

For now it's good and what later we will see. She is warrior and archer so she maybe shwoing up somewere else later. She can be cryptic woman and show up sometimes here and there and anyone won't know who she really is

[alex]

Ah, like a spy. Or a master of disguise. Hey, have you seen that movie, "Master of Disguise?"

[Kriss]

No I haven't
Ok tomorrow I will descirbe in detail Kriss de Valnor as my character

[alex]

Look forward to it. You know about the 'Characters' folder, do you?

[Sinbad]

Mar 12, 2009 16:20:30 GMT -5 Kriss said:

For now it's good and what later we will see. She is warrior and archer so she maybe shwoing up somewere else later. She can be cryptic woman and show up sometimes here and there and anyone won't know who she really is

I like that

[firouz]

Oh. And just to let you know, somehow when I first saw your picture, you reminded me of Jack Sparrow. The Curse of the Black Pearl.

Archer. And sneaky character. Could you be a thief or the king/queen of thieves? You would befriend Sinbad, therefore he would have some feeling for you. He later see you getting in a fight with a baker because you were trying to steal bread. He pays the baker and off you go. Similar to the beginning of Aladdin when he first meets Jasmine.

[Kriss]

Description of Kriss de Valnor
The brave, mystifying, independent warrior and the best archer. Kriss come form north (That can be useful maybe sometimes with Eyolf’s motive or something like that) She had left family Home when She was 12 and later she met Singwald who taught her a swordplay and how to use the bow. She was working very hard than she became the best one. Kriss and Singwald were wining all archer’s contest. She was thief too, with Singwald they were stealing and than they were trading on a black market .One day when they stole something one soldier killed Singwald. She had to live alone and she became a pirate (just like Viking but she’s woman so she can’t be Viking). She had a son Aniel (someone cut his speech organ when He was crying. He is no so important because he’s just a little boy who can’t speak. Aniel can just be somewhere in tavern. In comics he has some power so here he can has too and that maybe get some part in far future) When she got some trouble she took Aniel and move to Basra, bought tavern and start rock the boat here on the East.


So how do you like it??

[Sinbad]

I like it, it sounds interesting
I think you can use this as the history of your character in your character introduction.
Did you have a look at other character introductions already? Just making sure you´re finding your way around the board.

[Kriss]

yea I have already looked at other character introduction But before I will do mine I wanna know that you like idea of Kriss de Valnor??

[Sinbad]

Good.
Well, my approval you have.
Just a question. Her son´s around then, too? How old is your character when he´s 12?
Oh and by the way, maybe you should change "speech organ" into "tongue" *feels sorry for letting her inner teacher get the better of her again*

[Kriss]

Kriss is maybe around 24 and Aniel is aroud 2 or 3.
Yea I konw but it wasn't tongue but I don't know what is english synonym becose it isn't in my dictionary...

[Kriss]

maybe "voice box " ??

[Sinbad]

Wait, however did I come to think of the age 12? *is weird today*

Aah, wait, so you don´t mean the tongie but the uhm... place in the throat where sounds are produced? Then it´d be voice box, yes.

[Kriss]

She was 12 when she left home but before she moved to Basra it was few years