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Post by maevezanar on Sept 10, 2012 21:46:55 GMT -5
so that's what you mean by that? :"> Oh well, it's all good. Don't worry. I didn't feel upset then and certainly not now. I'm glad you like the fics. As for 365 days, I'm having some new ideas for part 2.
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Post by Firouz on Sept 10, 2012 22:35:38 GMT -5
LOL I LOVE this; it was hilarious and cute and it toally made me smile!
And a part 2?! Will it be of Maeve being pregnant? Maeve already terrified the crew during her monthlys...what will she do to them during the pregnancy hormones?? LOL
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Post by MJ on Sept 30, 2012 4:56:29 GMT -5
Wow that was funny! Especially when she turns him into a frog! I could just see the little scenes unfolding in my head, you didn't even need the descriptions! And sometimes they turned into the little cartoony people you made, with a very clear sweat-drop and stuff Hee and she made Doubar faint! Totally made me laugh out loud!
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Post by maevezanar on Mar 25, 2013 23:55:44 GMT -5
I'm back with part 2 of this fic. Enjoy the not-so lovey dovey moments of S/M
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002
"Okay, line up sailors and remember that each of you only has 5 seconds."
"Sinbad! Aren't you going a little bit overboard with that time limit?"
"Hey the sailor over there! Get in line!... and no, Maeve! I think it's necessary to keep watch on these sailors and protect your chastity."
"Since when have you cared about my chastity? And please! This is my first day back on board after two years. Couldn't I just give my old mates some friendly hugs?"
"You could but still... I don't think you're obliged to. A mere ‘hi’ would be enough! Hey you... yes, I'm talking to you, the sailor by the sail. If my memory serves me right, you joined the ship after she fell overboard so you don't know her and practically, have no need to get in line to welcome her back. Go back to your work! See, Maeve? Those guys are taking advantage of your friendliness. Hold on a sec ! You over there...that was more than 5 seconds. Get out!"
"Sinbad! This isn't funny at all. Are you jealous 'cause I didn't give you the same treatment back then in the dream ?!"
"Wh-what....hah! You couldn't possibly mistake my noble act with such jealous attitude, could you?"
"Er...you're not?"
"No...! Of course not! No! What captain would do that? So no...Definitely not jealousy!"
“If it’s so, be a good boy and go play at the tiller, captain My-knight-in-shining-amor. Who knows, I might work out some sort of rewards for your good behavior. Right, head straight...yes, like that...”
-AoS-
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"Hi Maeve! I come to collect my reward."
"What?"
"What's what?"
"Er...It's late, Sinbad! Go back to your bed. You're shift is over and you're too tired that you start to hallucinate I owed you something."
"Hey! Don't you forget what you promised me yesterday. Remember? The sailors? Free hugs for world peace?"
"So? I didn't promise anything. I was just saying some random comments while you happened to hear it and coincidentally acted upon it."
"Whoa-What? Wait! Don't close the door just yet, you tricky witch!"
"Sorceress! You stubborn and pervert captain!"
"Fine, sorceress! But how am I the one at fault when I'm just simply standing up for my rights and defend your honor? You see, a promise is a promise. When you promise someone something, you gotta keep it; otherwise, you will lose your credibility and in this trading sea business, when you have to go out in the open sea for days with a lots of cargo, you really nee-...uhm....uhm...uhmm..."
"Happy? Care to shut up now?"
"Yes...er no! Wait! Maeve! Open the damn door! You don't seriously expect me to go to sleep after that fiery kiss, do you? Damnit! I got turned on!"
-AoS-
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"Sinbad...you broke her magic vial?"
"I know Firouz! Even worse, it's taken her three months to brewed it...Well, guess we have no choice then. Quick! Take the cloth, Firouz while I'll find a broom."
"Hey! Hey! What're you doing? Tampering with the crime scene? No! I refuse to cooperate in such a cowardly act. I'd say you confess to her."
"You honestly think she'd show mercy to me without at least forcing me to walk the planks?"
"Who walks what?"
"Oops Maeve?"
"So...I can see that we're having quite a mess here. Fess up! Which one of you?"
"Breath, Sinbad! Breath!"
"Yeah...yeah...breath, Firouz, breath! Okay so Maeve, the thing is...when I went looking for you in your cabin, I...er... accidentallydroppedryourmagicvial."
"I'm lost you, Sinbad!"
"I mean...I was curious. It got this sparkling golden color of a liquid while just days ago, it was purely dark green. My curiosity got the best of me so I picked up the vial and then came the wind, and a sudden wave, I lost balance then next thing I know, it fell off my hand....I...I...."
"Oh..."
"Why does she 'oh' me, Firouz? That's too simple of a response to the fact that I waste her effort of the last 3 months?"
"She probably thinks it's okay! Don't worry, she's fine!"
"No! It's not okay. She's not fine and I should definitely worry about that. Look Firouz! Why is she walking to the shelf and take out another golden vial? Are you thinking what I'm thinking, mate?"
"Don't be silly, Sinbad! She's not gonna poison you or else she wouldn't have that soft look in her eyes!"
"You really think so? You really think there is not a single trace of murderous intention in her eyes?"
"Would you two stop whispering in front of me? That's so not polite to a lady. Here, take this Sinbad!"
"Er....why are...why are you handing me a vial?"
" ‘Cause I'm so turning you from a man to a woman with this liquid. Isn't that obvious? Go ahead ! Drink it at once! ...Seriously, idiot! If I were you, I’d stop being a statue and take a close look at this vial as it’s the real magic potion while the one you broke just took me 3 hours to brew. They happened to share the same color but have different usage."
"Then how am I supposed to know?"
"Your problem, not mine."
"...B-but if that is so then all my worries were for nothing? Couldn't you just say so sooner?"
"I was having fun with you, besides how is it my fault now that you're the one at wrong for intruding my privacy?"
-AoS-
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"Take back what you said earlier?"
"Huh? What did I say, captain?"
"How could you have forgotten? You said you h-a-t-e-d me, didn't you?"
"Eh? I did?"
"Wha....you really forgot? Don't you know how much it hurt me?"
"Really, Sinbad? Just a random word in a heated argument could bother you that much? Oh...ok, alright. Don't pout. Take this kiss as my apology. Better now, Captain Sensitive?"
"Much better. Apology accepted and Maeve, Don't.Ever.Say.That.Word.Again. Never ever!"
"Aye! Aye Captain!"
-AoS-
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“Kill me, Maeve”
“No!”
“Just slash your sword at me! Or grill me with your fire ball!”
“I’m so not killing you, Sinbad!”
“Please, I beg you. Have mercy and end my suffering... I’m dying here anyway...”
“You only have a flu, Sinbad.”
“I can’t breath through my nose...my mouth hurts and every parts of me are crying in pain. So please, pity me...”
“That’s exactly why I’ll go get Firouz. Stay put in bed, you drama queen.”
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Post by banmaixanh on Mar 26, 2013 7:53:34 GMT -5
Haha. I love Maeve. ;D ;D ;D A humorous story but very lovely one.
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Post by maevezanar on Mar 26, 2013 11:15:47 GMT -5
Thx Ban! Now that I read it again, even I feel that Maeve tends to bully Sinbad in every occasion. How cruel!
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Post by Kriss on Mar 26, 2013 17:04:36 GMT -5
maevezanarAww... Cute little piece I really had a lot of fun with it Nice job
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Post by Doubar on Mar 28, 2013 6:37:18 GMT -5
@mzanar: Hahaha, aye, Maeve is being quite mean to the poor Captain there. But it's much fun to read these tiny shots. I love most the "Sinbad has a flu" one. xD
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Post by maevezanar on Mar 28, 2013 9:04:30 GMT -5
Thanks Kriss, and Tiakisu for taking the time posting your comments back at FFN and here Ha Ha. I guess Sinbad is so whiny 'cause he's supposed to be the Master of 7 seas. He's mighty and well, I guess he rarely got sick due to his good physical health. So when he's sick and cannot jump around involved in troubles, he really feels that it's the end of the world. =]]
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Post by Kriss on Mar 28, 2013 10:33:52 GMT -5
You're welcome
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Post by MJ on Mar 28, 2013 11:11:53 GMT -5
Awww, you wrote more of them! I love these little tid-bits! I have to admit, what I like most is how childish they are ;D And just imagining Sinbad loudly yelling about how turned on he is in the middle of the hallway LOL The first one was a little confusing, it took me a minute to figure out what was going on. That's all I have in the way of concrit. Keep 'em coming!
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Post by maevezanar on Mar 29, 2013 7:29:41 GMT -5
Oh the first one means that the captain isn't happy with that much attention Maeve got from the crews welcoming her back. So he ordered his sailors to keep their limit, and even if they hug her...it's only limited to 5 seconds per one. Just imagine the line of sailors, a pretty witch and a jealous captain I hope I can write 365 ones for a year... but really don't know if I could do it. Anyone here wants to join ? Like...contribute yours and we'll make it to 365 days of their lives.
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Post by banmaixanh on Mar 29, 2013 11:55:36 GMT -5
Anyone here wants to join ? Like...contribute yours and we'll make it to 365 days of their lives. I like what you do a lot. It's very enjoyable. I laughed a lot reading it and wish you would write more in the future. But join with you in the project. I have no ability. But how about giving you some random ideas like the plan to steal a kiss from the lady or the captain tries to give her the romantic things but she destroys his plan like: "Maeve, come here...!!! QUICK!!!!" "What's up Sinbad? Is anything burning?" "Can you stop saying that way?" "No" "Ok. Do you know what I've just found" "No" "Hey, can't you be a little interested?" "No" "I've found out that there are a lot of stars on the sky. Look!!!... Ouch, MAEVE. That book is heavy and my head isn't a rock." "It's the warning. Next time, don't ask for my mercy!!! Give it to me" "What?" "The rose. Give it to me. I don't have time to stay here counting the stars with you." "Ok. Here." "Next time, just put it in my cabin. I know it is you but if it isn't you, who cares?" "WHAT...?" "Nothing. Thank you." "You? " "What? Is anything wrong?" "No. Go away." "I have no plan to stay." I can imagine but have no ability to turn it into something which the people can read and can understand. So I would love to give you some ideas but writing I can't. But if you need an argument, tell me what Sinbad does I think I can find out what Maeve would say.
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Post by Doubar on Mar 29, 2013 12:04:27 GMT -5
You're welcome MZanar. I fear I won't be of help either though. Sinbad and Maeve are a difficult topic for me and in addition to that I'm just having kind of a creative blockage. But I hope you'll be able to continue with the shots nevertheless.
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Post by Firouz on Mar 30, 2013 16:51:25 GMT -5
That is SO funny! I LOVE how Sinbad is panicking about harming or breaking Maeve's things! LOL
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