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Post by Guest on Mar 3, 2010 14:10:52 GMT -5
@all: You kind of have to alter the first part a little bit, but in general, I think it can work.
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Post by Doubar on Mar 3, 2010 15:34:53 GMT -5
Hum, well in general I like he idea with the captain who offers him a better position.  About the first part: aye, it doesn't work exactly like you suggested it, Mody, since this would require adding a total bunch of posts to an early part of the rpg.  And the dialogues themselves ... well, I don't know if you expected us to follow that one, but I rather think you just wanted to give an example of how things could work. About Caipra and Ziad: As I suggested in the thoughts about the story thread, I would think it to be okay for her to tell the guys who Ziad is and what he came for. One: doesn't she lose the guys' trust in her that way (the version you suggested might have the guys wonder what Caipra keeps away from them) and two: would it be a perfect possibility to have the crew and Ziad befriend each other. All in all: I agree with the ending, but the first parts should be altered. My very personal opinion.
Mwahaha, the scene where Doubar hugs Sean is funny. ^^ But I personally think that these kind of hugs are reserved for those who are very dear to the big man. *knows that Maeve can prepare herself for a mega-big-Doubar-hug once she gets set free ;D * |
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Post by Guest on Mar 3, 2010 15:47:34 GMT -5
Yes, as I said you have to alter the first part, because Caipra is already with you. This would be minor. Sean just comes down, says hey, and asks where's Bryn.
And the script, no, I do not expect you to follow it word for word. It was intended to give Kriss a feeling of how to act as Sean.
And about Ziad, Caipra can say anything she wants. Just do not tell the crew why Ziad is there before their chat. Caipra may tell them AFTER her and Ziad's chat.
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Post by Kriss on Mar 3, 2010 15:51:37 GMT -5
So, we leave my version: he left to the toilet and met some friend?
Should he join you now? or wait few more posts?
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Post by Guest on Mar 3, 2010 15:55:24 GMT -5
Well, you could say that.
And I would pop up whenever, as if unexpectedly came out of nowhere. ;D
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Post by Caipra on Mar 3, 2010 15:57:11 GMT -5
Sean could join the crew while Caipra and Ziad are talking together...just a suggestion...
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Post by Guest on Mar 3, 2010 15:58:07 GMT -5
Yeah, he could.
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Post by Kriss on Mar 3, 2010 16:03:12 GMT -5
Sean could join the crew while Caipra and Ziad are talking together...just a suggestion... me like the idea |
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Post by Doubar on Mar 3, 2010 16:06:25 GMT -5
Just do not tell the crew why Ziad is there before their chat. Caipra may tell them AFTER her and Ziad's chat. Yep, the idea was that she tells them afterwards, anyway.  And yup, I think the idea of Sean coming back while Caipra is with Ziad is just good. |
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Post by Guest on Mar 3, 2010 16:10:06 GMT -5
Sean could join the crew while Caipra and Ziad are talking together...just a suggestion... me like the idea Okay, then it will have to wait till tomorrow, because Ziad has to go soon. Pa pa  |
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Post by Doubar on Mar 3, 2010 16:16:41 GMT -5
@sarah: Yeah, it will have to wait anyway since first at least one of the crew should react to what Caipra said. |
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Post by Guest on Mar 3, 2010 16:18:10 GMT -5
And what did Caipra say?
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Post by Doubar on Mar 3, 2010 16:41:32 GMT -5
@sarah: (...) "Well, when (Bryn) woke up, she was scared and confused, she don't really understand what happened in the streets. She only remembered that something scared her. She didn't feel safe and..." She quickly looked around herself, making sure that nobody was there and added. "Unconsciously, her magic awoke inside her. Nothing serious, don't worry, but that sudden energy inside her weakened her and and that's why she fainted when she arrived here." The guys should have time to react on that because Caipra told them that Bryn used magic. And the guys will for sure get worried a little because of that one. |
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Post by Guest on Mar 3, 2010 22:57:08 GMT -5
O...kay. So Caipra sounds.........rushed.  ;D But sure the guys can start to say something and is then interrupted by the sight of Sean entering. |
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Post by Doubar on Mar 4, 2010 12:27:43 GMT -5
@sarah: Hehe, naw, her post has been longer but I decided to only copy what she said about Bryn. And... you mean Ziad entering, right? |
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About the first part: aye, it doesn't work exactly like you suggested it, Mody, since this would require adding a total bunch of posts to an early part of the rpg. 
And the dialogues themselves ... well, I don't know if you expected us to follow that one, but I rather think you just wanted to give an example of how things could work. 
;D But sure the guys can start to say something and is then interrupted by the sight of Sean entering.