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Post by 19101989 on Feb 28, 2010 13:35:28 GMT -5
You should not be so sure ;D ;D *grins broadly at Sarah* See ? ;D |
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Post by Guest on Feb 28, 2010 13:41:28 GMT -5
I don't think they will be rivals. You should not be so sure ;D ;D Great, so another catfight. ;D And Doubar made her mad.  |
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Post by Kriss on Feb 28, 2010 13:44:12 GMT -5
Great, so another catfight. ;D Catfight? *laughs but because of other reason* But no, I would not call it like that  |
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Post by Doubar on Feb 28, 2010 13:45:30 GMT -5
@kriss: *shifty eyes* Doubar made her mad? Oy, that totally doesn't sound all too good ... xD
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Post by Guest on Feb 28, 2010 13:53:53 GMT -5
Great, so another catfight. ;D Catfight? *laughs but because of other reason* But no, I would not call it like that Aw, I just love those catfights. I am sending you pm, because this may......be inappropriate here. ;D |
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Post by Kriss on Mar 6, 2010 11:15:15 GMT -5
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Post by 19101989 on Mar 6, 2010 11:25:40 GMT -5
Wow kriss I loved this chapter! your way is improving very nicely  i loved how you expressed Bryn's feelings! what i liked most was those lines Spoiler Alert She was still watching her captain with sadness in her eyes. She loved that man but his heart had always belonged to the other woman. The woman which she never got to know. Her rival was invisible, just a part of his memory. The brunette subconsciously did not want to find the woman who had won the captain's heart but on the other hand she wanted to know some more about her - she wanted to meet this woman.reviewed !  |
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Post by Kriss on Mar 6, 2010 11:29:28 GMT -5
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Post by Firouz on Mar 6, 2010 11:32:51 GMT -5
I totally agree Bryn!
And I reviewed too!
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Post by Kriss on Mar 6, 2010 11:37:42 GMT -5
I totally agree Bryn! And I reviewed too! Thank you, too  |
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Post by 19101989 on Mar 6, 2010 11:57:12 GMT -5
caipra's vid is always a good inspiration |
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Post by Caipra on Mar 6, 2010 12:11:58 GMT -5
@kriss: Aww, I gave you inspiration? I'm happy to hear that. I'm going to read your chapter right now.  EDIT: I just read it! Awesome! You're very good at this. We want the rest !!!! ;D |
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Post by Kriss on Mar 6, 2010 12:36:49 GMT -5
@kriss: Aww, I gave you inspiration? I'm happy to hear that. I'm going to read your chapter right now. EDIT: I just read it! Awesome! You're very good at this. We want the rest !!!! ;D Yes, you inspired me a little Aww. Thank you! And you will got the rest soon |
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Post by Doubar on Mar 6, 2010 13:40:13 GMT -5
@kriss: Awwww, I really like that chapter. And I pity Bryn. It's horrible to love someone but know their heart belongs to another one...  Well done, honey. ;D |
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Post by Kriss on Mar 6, 2010 13:49:18 GMT -5
@kriss: Awwww, I really like that chapter. And I pity Bryn. It's horrible to love someone but know their heart belongs to another one... Well done, honey. ;D Thank you ;D |
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