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[Rongar]

read and reviewed

[Doubar]

Dec 18, 2010 17:16:06 GMT -5 Rongar said:

read and reviewed

Ditto.

[Kriss]

@doubar

Nha, seriously. Very good chapter.

Thank you

I really like the chat between Sakim and
Doubs, and the conversation between Alena and Caipra is most interesting! To
know that Scratch already appeared to the mundana lady... intriguing twist!

Scratch doesn't want Sinbad's soul just because. Everything has its reasons ;D

Can't wait to read about Sakim's and Mala's first meeting. And how Alena will
react towards her - a poor woman with her young son.

Let's say that they first meeting will be really "hot". You will find out what I mean ;D
(but don't worry - nothing obscene)
As for Alena... hymmmm... she is a problem but well... I will think of something.

Mala

Like I said before, LOVE the backstory of Drego!

Interseting, isn't it ;D I'm so creative ;D

His popularity is similar to what Sinbad's will be when he's born and grown! I
can't wait to read more!

You noticed it!

And my best quote from this chapter!
(...)Doubar broke his pondering, “I saw your mom once at the market. She is scary.”
Sakim turned at him and giggled “Thanks a lot…”(...)
;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D

[Firouz]

Yes, that was a cool sentence!

[Kriss]

Chapter3
www.fanfiction.net/s/6503681/3/Because_every_saga_has_its_beginning


Like always special thanks to Stef and Sam

[Firouz]

Read and Reviewed!
I like how Turok, Trea, Trias and even Rumina are mentioned! LOL...I feel a bit bad for Rumina though....bad, bad Turok...not loving his daughter simply because she was first born and not male!

[Kriss]

Jan 11, 2011 17:52:51 GMT -5 Firouz said:

Read and Reviewed!

Saw it, thanks

I like how Turok, Trea, Trias and even Rumina are mentioned! LOL...I feel a bit bad for Rumina though....bad, bad Turok...not loving his daughter simply because she was first born and not male!

LOL It's not about Rumina ;D About Bryn ;D In my story she is older than Rumina. Besides she looks older.

But look how nasty Alena is ;D

And as for Berenika, I imagine her like that

[Rongar]

Oh yea! I had forgotten about the fact that Bryn was the older of the two! And yea, she does look older than Rumina doesn't she?

Ans Alena was a bit bitchy!

[Doubar]

@kriss: Aww, you're most welcome.
And reviewed by the way. ;D

@kriss&Rongar: Dunno whether she really looks older. *shrugs* Might also be the clothing and all. In any case though I think Mariah was younger than Julianna - though it was only by some months if I remember right.

[Kriss]

Mariah(1963) is older than Julianna(1968) and just btw I heard she is after the face lifting...
But just in case you don't know it from me...

@doubar
Thanks *is going to see*

[Doubar]

Oh, really? I thought it was the other way round. Well, my bad then.
And really? Facelifting? o.O

[Kriss]

Jan 13, 2011 10:39:26 GMT -5 Doubar said:

Oh, really? I thought it was the other way round. Well, my bad then.

Mariah(1963)
Julianna(1968)

And really? Facelifting? o.O

From now, I don't know anything...

[Doubar]

Jan 13, 2011 10:42:55 GMT -5 Kriss said:

Mariah(1963)
Julianna(1968)

Holy! Whoa, then I definitely confused one of them with someone else. Thanx for correcting me.

[Kriss]

Jan 13, 2011 10:54:17 GMT -5 Doubar said:

Jan 13, 2011 10:42:55 GMT -5 Kriss said:

Mariah(1963)
Julianna(1968)

Holy! Whoa, then I definitely confused one of them with someone else. Thanx for correcting me.

Jacqueline is from 1968 just like Julianna. So all Zen's partners were older than him(1970) ;D The difference between him and Mariah is very visible (perhaps they wanted to hide it a bit behind Sinbad's new style but without any good effects...)

[Kriss]

@doubar
Hope you don't mind me answering here as usual

Well, what can I say? I like it! ;D

Well, thank you ;D

The meeting between Alena and Turok, Trea and her brother was for sure most
interesting. All the more as you mentioned how disappointed the dark sorcerer
was that his first-born was in fact a girl (poor Bryn). The three seem
literally emenate a dark aura. Well done, dear.

You already got to know Trias in "Little Miracles", "Family" but still good that you find it interesting, it should be that way at least
His disappointment is a reference to later events (about Bryn loosing her memeories and stuff) That all is also in "Little Miracles","Family"
Bad aura... well they are bad ;D

AS for Doubar, Sakim and the other boys: hehe, I can well feel with Doubs
here. Haha, seeing the others gape at him and the famous captain! Priceless!
;D

A funny accent after a stormy meeting at the party ;D A bit of AoS S1 style could it be...

And mentioning Aidan was a splendid idea! You really weave a net here - a net
in which so many series' plots seem to have their starting point! Truly great!

That's how should the prologue look like, shouldn't it?
Besides Adien is one of my favorites ;D

Also I like how the soon-to-be-queen acts towards little Doubar. She really
seems to be a nice person.

Casib's-mother-to-be ;D
Well, she is not very special charcter but a little bonus to the plot

And personally I cannot wait to see how Sakim's helping those poeple at the
port.

These people or you mean someone else, like the one blond woman ;D

Do go on writing, honey. ;D

Of course My winter-holidays starts tomorrow. Even if they are gonna to look a bit differnet than usual, for sure I will find time for everything.
Some of you already know that doing many things in the same time is not a big deal for me
And since my semesrtal marks doesn't look so bad ... ;D ;D ;D ;D