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Post by Kriss on Jan 21, 2010 8:56:36 GMT -5
Thanks guys for examples I think, I will feel where is the best momnet to finish one chapter and start another
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Post by Doubar on Jan 21, 2010 18:57:17 GMT -5
In the fanfic of the rpg, you seem to separate chapters when scenes change, such as chapter 1 was on the Nomad and chapter 2 was in Rumina's lair. Then chapter 3 went back to the Nomad and was separated based on the timeline and where the crew started new threads. Aya, that was what I meant.
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Post by Firouz on Jan 21, 2010 19:03:01 GMT -5
Sounds good to me!
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Post by Kriss on Feb 21, 2010 11:39:57 GMT -5
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Post by 19101989 on Feb 21, 2010 13:53:05 GMT -5
@kriss: read and reviewed you have good idea there honey. hehe and i liked how Maeve used Brynie as a median ;D I liked this line ;D "And I'm sure you will, Little brother but without some sleep you won't be a very good seeker" " just few mistakes though but as i said good idea
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Post by Bryn on Feb 21, 2010 13:53:50 GMT -5
I found a few spelling mistakes. But i enjoyed it alot. Good job kriss
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Post by Bryn on Feb 21, 2010 13:54:30 GMT -5
Ya i also liked when Maeve used bryn as a median
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Post by Kriss on Feb 21, 2010 14:21:53 GMT -5
alex and Wind Thanks I will edit it right now. In Polish, there are totally different spelling rules
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Post by Bryn on Feb 21, 2010 14:33:36 GMT -5
kriss: Its ok, i made alot of mistakes on the first chapter of my story too.
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Post by Kriss on Feb 21, 2010 14:36:41 GMT -5
OMG! I posted not revised version ! I'm so stupid... *beats herself in head*
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Post by Bryn on Feb 21, 2010 14:42:54 GMT -5
awwwe, im sure not alot of people have read it.
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Post by Kriss on Feb 21, 2010 14:46:02 GMT -5
awwwe, im sure not alot of people have read it. I hope so...
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Post by Doubar on Feb 21, 2010 16:10:06 GMT -5
Awww, Kriss, I'm sorry I couldn't come around earlier. Will r&r immediately. And whoooot for you fist fic!
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Post by Kriss on Feb 21, 2010 16:12:37 GMT -5
Awww, Kriss, I'm sorry I couldn't come around earlier. Will r&r immediately. And whoooot for you fist fic! Aww. Take your time
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Post by Doubar on Feb 21, 2010 16:15:37 GMT -5
@kriss: Left my comment. ;D Hey, you know something? I thought about this before, but what do you all think about adding the note I added to my fanfic-profile to all profiles of DL-members?
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