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Post by Doubar on Jan 9, 2010 14:28:24 GMT -5
@sarah: No harm done. And nice to know you like the idea. And what do you got in mind, when talking about an introduction. *wonders* You mean something like Scratch's "oceanic oppression"? Yeah, would be good I think for she's an original.
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Post by Guest on Jan 9, 2010 14:34:31 GMT -5
@sarah: And what do you got in mind, when talking about an introduction. *wonders* You mean something like Scratch's "oceanic oppression"? Yeah, would be good I think for she's an original. Well for introduction, similar to what you wrote. It would be written in the rp so readers get a sense of where this new chick came from. And I will add her thoughts.
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Post by Doubar on Jan 9, 2010 14:44:44 GMT -5
Yeah, would be a good idea I think. *turns to the others* What do you think about that, guys?
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Post by 19101989 on Jan 9, 2010 14:47:54 GMT -5
You mean making her narrate how she came, what she was doing before, what is her quest and the way she meet Bryn and how she saw her dark power? That will be amazing .
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Post by Guest on Jan 9, 2010 14:51:51 GMT -5
You mean making her narrate how she came, what she was doing before, what is her quest and the way she meet Bryn and how she saw her dark power? That will be amazing . Yeah, kind-of like that, yes. I will see what I can do. May take a few days. When I am done, do you want to discuss it before I post it?
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Post by Doubar on Jan 9, 2010 14:53:52 GMT -5
Hum, since she's an original, yeah, maybe it would be better to show it to us first. But I'm sure it will be good.
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Post by 19101989 on Jan 9, 2010 14:55:00 GMT -5
you have to reread "the dark side of the moon" me thinks
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Post by Guest on Jan 9, 2010 14:57:16 GMT -5
Hum, since she's an original, yeah, maybe it would be better to show it to us first. But I'm sure it will be good. Sure, I can do that. you have to reread "the dark side of the moon" me thinks Why? What is that?
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Post by Doubar on Jan 9, 2010 15:21:24 GMT -5
@sarah: Aye, give the dark side a read, because if Sarah whitnessed what Bryn did there, you should know what happened.
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Post by Guest on Jan 9, 2010 15:23:08 GMT -5
@sarah: Aye, give the dark side a read, because if Sarah whitnessed what Bryn did there, you should know what happened. What is "the dark side of the moon?"
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Post by 19101989 on Jan 9, 2010 15:24:59 GMT -5
*pushes both doubar and miss blondie aside and takes a deep breath then screams with all her might* AAAAAAAAAAAAAAhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh you read it before and criticized it too, man .
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Post by Sinbad on Jan 9, 2010 15:27:38 GMT -5
*is confused*
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Post by Guest on Jan 9, 2010 15:29:23 GMT -5
*pushes both doubar and miss blondie aside and takes a deep breath then screams with all her might* AAAAAAAAAAAAAAhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh you read it before and criticized it too, man . Did I? You mean the one where you floated up?
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Post by Doubar on Jan 9, 2010 15:32:22 GMT -5
@sinbad: Err, to sum it up: Sarah plans to do a little introduction one her character. And we finally came across that the best moment to add her to the play would be the following: she simply whitnessed Bryn's actions during "the dark side of the moon". She did so because she, too, heard the boy scream and since she tends to help people, she went to do so but instead found Bryn there. However, startled by the fact that Bryn obviously was shocked about her actions, she did not attack her right away but followed her instead. That's how she find out where Bryn stays and that she's got friends with her. And now Mody wants to write that scene plus some little background infos. And I adviced him to post it here first before really adding it to the play, since Sarah is an original character. @sarah: Aya, the thread where Bryn was floating up. distandlands.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=outside&action=display&thread=245&page=1
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Post by 19101989 on Jan 9, 2010 15:33:18 GMT -5
yeah floated up, formed fireballs, killed two men, frightened a little boy who was about to be headed, felt lost and miserable.
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