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Cyane
Feb 20, 2010 5:31:56 GMT -5
Post by Guest on Feb 20, 2010 5:31:56 GMT -5
I would go with "going to Basra, hoping Caipra could help her." The hunting down sounds odd, because he is much more powerful then her. Reminds me of a Buffy the Vampire Slayer.
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Cyane
Feb 20, 2010 6:42:50 GMT -5
Post by Doubar on Feb 20, 2010 6:42:50 GMT -5
Mel sort of mulling the idea over that while up in the far north, a family member or a loved one was sick. She made a deal with a evil sorcerer that she would trade her soul for her loved one to live but the sorcerer didn't save the love one and kept Cyane's soul. And thats all we got. I, too, find this idea to be pretty good. And well, there's still reason for her to be a stowaway. Depending on what the curse looks like she could have to hide from the world/make sure no one sees her. Or you could say that she stole something important from this sorcerer - something she learned would be needed when restoring her soul. Thus the sorcerer would most likely be on her tracks - meaning she has to hide and make sure no one knows of her whereabouts. How does that sound to you? @sarah: But please remember that Eleana was a slave, too. And if I remember right, wasn't being a slave for some time also part of Kriss' background? So no, no more being mistreated and having-been-a-slave stories me thinks. Agree with you on the hunting down thin though. Seeking for revenge sounds a little repetitive with having already a few characters doing so in our story.
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Cyane
Feb 20, 2010 7:07:57 GMT -5
Post by Guest on Feb 20, 2010 7:07:57 GMT -5
Realy? Did not remember about Kriss and Eleana. But anyway, I like the soul thingy better.
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Cyane
Feb 20, 2010 7:15:00 GMT -5
Post by Doubar on Feb 20, 2010 7:15:00 GMT -5
Quoted from Kriss' bio:
Vikings hated them and one day they attacked them, killed Shaigan and took Kriss with Aniel as the slaves. Vikings cut Aniel's vocal cords because his crying was driving them crazy. Perfidious Kriss ran away form Vikings with her son, moved
Quoted from Eleana's bio: Eleana has survived, was taken and sold as a slave for a wealthy family. It last several years, malnourished and abused, until she finally escaped by a happy coincidence,...
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Cyane
Feb 20, 2010 7:21:33 GMT -5
Post by Guest on Feb 20, 2010 7:21:33 GMT -5
Okay, thanks. And I see many grammar mistakes. ;D
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Cyane
Feb 20, 2010 11:07:09 GMT -5
Post by Firouz on Feb 20, 2010 11:07:09 GMT -5
Cyane, I LIKE your bio with the soul being taken eventhough the loved one wasn't saved!
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